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^{Well most of them are standard A,B,A,B rhyme scheme, not all my work but a good most of it. Sometimes things have a double meaning, but i guess poetry is more about the reader's thoughts rather then writer's comments, so tell me what you think...}

Blasphemous Poetry

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A banner for Morithin a smaller portion of solemn lines just kidding! This was made for me by a friend [SaNiTY™] So I placed it on here! Thank you Ashurii-Chan

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The picture is my friend's [SaNiTY™] I made the poem to go along with it

Welcome to the Church of blasphemy

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When Logic Betrays…

Lost and not found,
Away, in your mind, afar.
Stand, but not on ground,
Stand for who you are.

Plea without a bargain,
Nothing more then a want.
Show without an offering,
Nothing more then a taunt.

The riddle can’t be solved,
You’re the one who made it.
The riddle has evolved,
Can’t you just say it?

Locate the place within the mind,
Deep inside your brain.
Tell me where you find,
No one wants to be in sane.

On Religion…

I am not a lost soul,
This is not a tragedy.
When the black bell does toll,
I stand here, in Blasphemy.

There are two paths in my life,
Both twisted and long.
The judgment of what is right,
The choice of what may be wrong.

This is not to deceive,
Or argue fact or fake.
But I will defend what I believe,
And that the choice is mine to make.

Through my eyes, try to see,
If He views us all the same.
Then let Him the right to judge me,
Where is your right to blame?

I am sorry if I offended,
Conversing this Myth or Legend.
But I exercise the 1st Amendment,
Freedom from Religion.

16 Line Poetry

Let your mind run free,
In all blissful inspiration.
From your mind beautiful words flee,
To the page in desperation.

The act of conveying,
Your inner most thought and feelings.
So much deeper then just saying,
Poetry has far more meaning.

And the images that go with it,
As they fill your starving mind.
Like a beacon finally lit,
From the real world you are blind.

And all of this can come,
Even with all space and time.
From just a meekly some,
16 lines

Tree

Alone in the wood,
Where no man dare come.
Right where it should,
May nature ne’er be undone.

Like a towering guard,
It watches over the land.
Or so says the bard,
In his song so grand.

Over a hundred years old,
Yet leaves still green.
It ears never told,
Its eyes never seen.

That destruction is to man,
That everything must die.
Like the hourglass sand,
And we don’t even know why.

Walking On The Beach At Dusk (Senior Project)

I walk along a shallow shore
The waves give a small roar
I Find the place i seek
Open my mind as a door

The air soft and sleek
Pleasure in solitude i reek
The moon gives an omniscent glow
Brightening the otherwise bleak

I as i view nature's show
I recall all i have come to know
And what i soon will
Consumed with thoughts that overflow

A forever unpaid bill
Remove the paper from the frill
A cold and silent kill
A cold and silent kill

Ignorence

Alone, Forever...on the task bar of no return,
Here I wait in my blinking bleak existence.
Hoping a glance, my way, will turn,
The mouse clicking with no resistance.
My words, typed, will then be learned,
And then be replied much ambitious.
The silence leaves my only concern,
That I have become viewed with malicious.

Angel X2

She is as bright as a summer’s day,
She is as sweet as a flower.
it is uncanny the supernatural way,
her body emanates such immense power.

No one can resist her charm,
with a smile and a wink.
It almost seems she cannot harm,
I cannot comprehend It I cannot think.

How can she be real?
When the heavens ring her name.
Yet for some reason i feel,
This world will never be the same.

If you approach her she is shy,
Yet she truly is divine.
I hold her name on high,
I pray someday she’ll be mine.

Down With The Sickness

And so I have fell,
Try again, do I dare?
No, burn in hell,
For all I care...

Words, cut like an edge,
Wounds, left deep.
And this I pledge,
What I say, I keep.

All actions, have a cost,
Can you live with it?
Remorse, I have lost,
Do I look like I give a shit?

The end is near,
The horizon, I do see.
I walk with out fear,
"You've woken up the demon, in me!!!"

Contempt

Aren't You Glad We Are Now, And Not There, Because We Can Talk And See Each Other At School Now, But Eventually The Now Will Become The Then, And The Future Will Be Left To The When? When Will We Have Then What We Have Now, To Take And Look Back On Everyday like Wow...Yet We Will Still Be Friends, In The End...

Miles Apart

I remember when we met
And our slightly rocky start
Things may not be perfect yet
"You're always in my heart"

"I need you now"
That you are close
I need to show
Our friendship grows

Let us reminisce
Now that we have time
All about each other we'll miss
"I'll keep you deep inside"

I'll remember the poem
You'll remember the remarks
We'll remember this song
"We'll be miles apart"

Angels & Demons (remix ft. Chingy)

(Ah yall we get it right herr dis da remix)

She is bright as a summer’s day
He is dark as a winter’s night
Her innocence avoids any fray
He is looking for a fight

(TrackStar (oh oh))

His words cut like an edge
Her voice soothing as rain
Pain is all he pledges
She pledges to end all pain

(I like da way you do dat right thurr)

How can she be real?
Will he ever leave?
Her warmth I need to feel
Will his cold ever cease?

(Her man defendin her like a lawyer so bewarr
So dudes be handcuffin but dirrty dat aint farr)

The end is near
Approaching a new beginning
I walk with out fear
I cannot stop trembling

(Disturbing Tha Peace)

Ballad of a Broken Soul

Taking this world alone is not an easy task,
Yet it is one that this young man has took.
I wish I had time to ask,
Why did you leave without a second look?

He left out of frustration,
He left to clear his mind.
He left on a path of dissimilation,
He left not knowing what to find.

Few doubt he has been hurt,
Yet no one knows the cause.
His world has began to blur,
Is all hope truly lost?

He hates his friends,
How could they backstab him?
There friendship held an inevitable end,
Now he is covered with sin.

Blood covers his hands,
Sirens ring loudly into the night.
His feet pound on the sand,
The officers are coming to sight.

He reaches to his side,
This gun he knows well.
Behind a tree he hides,
He hopes to see his friends in hell.

As gun shots fire into the obsidian,
His heart is that of stone.
And as he is cast into oblivion,
He leaves this world, alone.

The Dragon

Majestic malice soaring above
Flying flapping in the sky
Dreadful diving this demonic dove
Crashing clenching hunger in its eyes

Approaching slowly with a gruesome gaze
Steps taken with a surreal stomp
Smoke bellowing in a haunting haze
Swallowing you whole in one carnivorous chomp

Things that go Together
_{Scribed when I was in elementary school}

One and two go together,
so do mouse and rat.
City and town, sad and frown,
Also dog and cat.

Train and railroad track go together,
So do basket and hot air balloon.
Trees and bear, bunny and hare,
Also moth and cocoon.

Crescent on the Ripple
_{My entry is the Heaven's Above contest}

Along the shallow water’s bank
Among the star filled night
On a stark swollen plank
Encompassed in angelic moonlight

Holding a lover’s hand
A cool breeze passes by
Shores lined with silvery sand
Not a cloud in the sky

Looking deep into their soul
Feeling their presence in your heart
Inside feeling finally whole
Knowing you will never part

Lights emanating from across the water
The world becomes a slow swirl of love and bliss
Leaning in, heart beating harder and harder
Lips pressing softly together as two lovers kiss

2006-03-29 [Art Guy]: Oh man, dude you rock

2006-03-29 [Blasphemy]: Thanks man

2006-03-31 [Dil*]: Spelling error, 'Ignorance', apart from that, good work.

2006-03-31 [Blasphemy]: Lol, well thank you for noticing that, i was actually going for a double meaning because the poem is about being "ignored" on msn, ^^

2006-05-02 [Blasphemy]: So...Im thank both of you for your comments, even though [Art Guy] is some random account I made....*sigh* maybe i should add more poetry..

2006-05-03 [Elysian]: bwhaahah. at least you have comments :D

2006-05-11 [Blasphemy]: alright alright, im adding more, im adding more...

2006-05-11 [Half-Mad Poet]: very interesting

2006-05-13 [Elysian]: Wow, Nathan...I like!

2006-05-13 [Elysian]: I think I came up with a guitar tune for that last song, Nate

2006-05-14 [One of Liberty]: They are truly amazingI really can't point out the ones I like best without naming them all.

2006-05-17 [Blasphemy]: *blushes* Thanks! I love your work too Dinah

2006-05-17 [Blasphemy]: *is the only poet in town who remix's his own work...and features Chingy*

2006-05-17 [Tiffany-Dawn]: hi hi

2006-05-18 [Half-Mad Poet]: lol

2006-05-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: :)

2006-05-18 [Blasphemy]: Hello all

2006-05-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: ello

2006-05-18 [Elysian]: oh man...you got chingy. I hate you forever!!!!

2006-05-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: what is worng with chingy

2006-05-18 [Elysian]: Never said anything was "worng" with chingy. I was saying that I hate blasphemy for being the only one of us to successfully remix!! Especially with a celebrity!!!

2006-05-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: ok i understand now

2006-05-18 [Elysian]: ")

2006-05-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: :) i gttoa go 4 ow but i will be back 2morow ttyl

2006-05-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: i am back now

2006-05-18 [Blasphemy]: Welcome back, thank you for commenting on the wiki, It is always good to see poetry supporters

2006-05-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: uer welcome

2006-05-28 [Linderel]: I like these. ^.^ I will spare you from my Nazism, though, unless you want me to practice it. :P The first line of 'Angel X2' immediately reminded me of Shakespeare's 18th sonnet, by the way.

2006-05-28 [Tiffany-Dawn]: go a head

2006-05-28 [Blasphemy]: Ut oh, I swear I was not stealing anything, I didn't even realize that, lol, well some things are intended, such as the mispelling of ignorance, and then mispelling of insane

2006-05-28 [Tiffany-Dawn]: okies

2006-05-29 [Linderel]: The Shakespeare comment was a positive thing. :)

2006-05-29 [Blasphemy]: Hooray then! he he

2006-05-29 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yay

2006-06-02 [SaNiTY™]: omigod...The one featuring chingy...I could almost picture it..XD Your stuff rocks..and thanks for inviting me to join in here...

2006-06-02 [Blasphemy]: he he he, you are welcome, it is a remix of Angel X2 and Down With The Sickness lol

2006-06-04 [Tiffany-Dawn]: ehehe

2006-06-06 [Blasphemy]: Well, to any fans of my work, I guess, lol =P Thanks to [SaNiTY™] I now sorta have a banner for Morithin lol, yay for Solemn lines!!! woooh! he he, anyway, here is the URL if you are an avid fan o.O? lol just kidding here ya go http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a381/blasphemist/Lewis.jpg

2006-06-06 [Tiffany-Dawn]: blahh

2006-06-08 [Blasphemy]: Well, I entered the contest and I made a new poem

2006-06-08 [Half-Mad Poet]: " Ballad of a Broken Soul" nice. really like it

2006-06-11 [Tiffany-Dawn]: hey

2006-06-11 [Blasphemy]: Hello and thanks, I did that one upon request for a friend, homework assignment lol, shhh don't tell anyone

2006-06-13 [Tiffany-Dawn]: okies

2006-06-14 [ditz-chan]: these are very good! i wuv them! :D

2006-06-14 [Tiffany-Dawn]: gah...........................wh ydo i feel like i am bad luck :(

2006-06-14 [Blasphemy]: what do you mean you are bad luck? and thank you Amanda

2006-06-14 [ditz-chan]: your very welcome! i like them poem miles apart! *sigh* so romantic!

2006-06-14 [Blasphemy]: the qoutes are from the song by Yellowcard

2006-06-14 [ditz-chan]: but still its sooooo good!!!

2006-06-14 [Blasphemy]: Thank you friend, hehe ^^

2006-06-14 [ditz-chan]: your welcome!!!!!! :D

2006-06-16 [Tiffany-Dawn]: i just like i am bad luck cuz the fisrt time i moved my grammie died 10 befor chirstmas and now grampie is really sick

2006-06-17 [Blasphemy]: it will be ok, maybe you just need your family right now and your family needs you?

2006-06-17 [*dragonstar*]: those are so wonderful. :3

2006-06-17 [Blasphemy]: Thank you ^^

2006-06-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: maybe u ra right

2006-06-18 [ditz-chan]: awww...i hope ur grandma's ok!!!!! -^^-

2006-06-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: she is dead.................but i will live

2006-06-18 [ditz-chan]: awww iam so sorry for your loss! *hugs*

2006-06-18 [Tiffany-Dawn]: it is okies *huggles back*

2006-06-18 [ditz-chan]: lol!!! so ya! me so bored! oh and i like your new poems on here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -^^-

2006-06-18 [Blasphemy]: hehe thank you friend!

2006-06-18 [ditz-chan]: your welcome!!!!!! :D

2006-06-19 [Elysian]: you had better rhythm than me even when you were in elementary school, ya jerk. :D

2006-06-19 [Blasphemy]: *shifty eyes*

2006-06-19 [Elysian]: I knew it...you've been on brain crack since age 3.

2006-06-19 [ditz-chan]: huh? whats going on? me so lost.............*blank stare*

2006-06-19 [Elysian]: good thing...to understand is pure insanity

2006-06-20 [Tiffany-Dawn]: i am lost here *rolls eyes* lol

2006-06-20 [ditz-chan]: i know me2!!!!

2006-06-21 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz lol

2006-06-21 [Blasphemy]: lol, you guys are silly

2006-06-22 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yes i know we are and i love it too lol you are silly too blasphemy

2006-06-22 [Blasphemy]: hehe, you know it :P

2006-06-22 [Tiffany-Dawn]: oh yaz lol :P

2006-06-22 [ditz-chan]: yesh iam the silly willy! weeeh! :P

2006-06-22 [Elysian]: *hangs head in shame* wow.

2006-06-22 [Blasphemy]: lol, what?

2006-06-22 [ditz-chan]: awww you dont have to hang your head in shame! *pats ur back for reursurance*

2006-06-23 [Tiffany-Dawn]: *hehe* *hanging upside down from a tree* sup pips? lol

2006-06-23 [ditz-chan]: nothing but waiting for SOMEONE to get back online! *points to lewis*

2006-06-23 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz ive been whaiting for him too * points at Lewis too*

2006-06-23 [Blasphemy]: alright, alright, I am online sheesh

2006-06-23 [ditz-chan]: lol! yay!!! *dances around happily*

2006-06-23 [Blasphemy]: you guys realize that this is a poetry wiki right lol, I mean I love that I have fans but you guys like the poetry too right?

2006-06-23 [ditz-chan]: of course i do silly! u already know i do! so..ya! lol

2006-06-23 [Blasphemy]: lol, alright, just checking lol, *waves at Tiffany who is upside down in the tree*

2006-06-23 [ditz-chan]: okays! ^^

2006-06-24 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz i like it too lol *get's down from the tree and smiles*

2006-06-24 [ditz-chan]: weeeh!

2006-06-24 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz

2006-06-24 [ditz-chan]: so......um...oh guess what? i put in a poem for a contest and my poem is going to be in a book! weeh! then i get to be drawn for the grand prize of 10,000 and first prize 1,000!! i cannot wait! ^^

2006-06-24 [Tiffany-Dawn]: wow...........i bet u r really happy

2006-06-24 [ditz-chan]: iam happy! cause if i win all that money there is so much i wanna do with it!!!!!!!!! weeeh!

2006-06-24 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz :D hope u win

2006-06-24 [ditz-chan]: i know! weeh! *hugs*

2006-06-24 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz *huggles back*

2006-06-24 [ditz-chan]: weeeh! hugs!

2006-06-25 [Elysian]: Looks like those rhesus monkeys got loose again.

2006-06-25 [ditz-chan]: lol huh? *confused*

2006-06-25 [Elysian]: I'm talking about you and spaz kid

2006-06-25 [Blasphemy]: and now everything starts to make more sense, your usernames are [ditz-chan] and [Tiffany-Dawn] lol :P

2006-06-25 [Half-Mad Poet]: true *shift eyes* need to find the cages again.

2006-06-25 [ditz-chan]: lmao! thats so true!! lol iam a ditz! :D why find the cage? iam not that mean! or maybe! muhahahaha

2006-06-26 [Elysian]: wow. you don't get many implications, do you

2006-06-26 [ditz-chan]: ummm...i dont think so! hehehe

2006-06-26 [ditz-chan]: boredness!

2006-06-26 [ditz-chan]: if you think lewis is cool go here and sign up! we love blasphemy ^^

2006-06-26 [Blasphemy]: thank you Amanda, that was very nice of you

2006-06-26 [ditz-chan]: ur wecome!!!!! ne time friend!!!

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: hehe

2006-07-01 [ditz-chan]: wootness! ^^

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz for the wootness lol

2006-07-01 [ditz-chan]: wooooottttnnnesss! tehehe^^

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: YAZ LOL

2006-07-01 [ditz-chan]: man iam so bored!!!!! :(

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: me too :(

2006-07-01 [ditz-chan]: *sniff*

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: *sad face*

2006-07-01 [ditz-chan]: awww...*hugs*

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: *huggles back*aww

2006-07-01 [ditz-chan]: hehehehe i love hugs!

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: i love huggles too :D

2006-07-01 [ditz-chan]: hehehehe we have another thing in common!

2006-07-01 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz for us

2006-07-02 [ditz-chan]: ^^

2006-07-02 [Tiffany-Dawn]: ^.^

2006-07-02 [ditz-chan]: man...iam gong to watch dr.dolittle 3 in awhile! yay! ^^

2006-07-02 [Tiffany-Dawn]: yaz lol

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