Side notes for:
Entophy
Momo=もも
Evan=エファン
Library= としょかん
The names are in Japaneses is for my sake when I'm highlighting the parts for actors I know what to highlight.
Very hard to explain.
also, Momo = peach (that becomes important later on)
<note this is my first time trying to wright a screen play( and I'm really bad at it) and comments are appreciated I also know that there is very little action telling the actors what to do this is done for a reason and that is that I already have actors and I fell that they do the best work when they are on there own.(adn I'm lazy and just want to direct the film)>
Entrophy
By SHIFT
Main Actors
もも。。。。。。ようこ
イファン。。。。。けい
Scene 1
としょかん
[Sitting in a chair reading a book; イファン starts to shack his foot in frustration, and the audience and now hear the voice of a young woman (もも) who is reading out loud off screen] [イファン; looks up from his book, to see もも reading a grim brothers fairy tale out loud. イファン then gently puts a book mark in his book and closes it, standing up and places it on the chair. Walks toもも]
イファン
Excuse me
[ももdoesn‘t hear him the fist time, soイファン says a little louder]
Excuse me
もも
Not so, loud we are in a library
イファン
You’re reading quite loud could you maybe be a little softer
もも
I can try; but it’s hard when I get into a book that I’ve already read. I’m momo by the way.
イファン
Oh... thanks
もも
So what are you reading?
イファン
A school book, to be a lawyer
もも
Ewww…That’s boring
イファン
Well yes... it quite is.
もも
Then why read it?
イファン
Well … um you see.. I’m studying to be a lawyer and It’s a required book.
もも
Oh... ewww… so, it’s like reading Huck fin for the second time
イファン
In a way
もも
You ever read anything else?
イファン
Of course I do
もも
What Kind?
イファン
Mysteries, Horrors,
もも
Fairy Tales
イファン
Not, particularly
もも
What!? Why?
イファン
There all lies things that can’t happen their not real
もも
So that’s what makes it fun
イファン
Lying is not fun
もも
Then why did you choose to be a lawyer
I'm not going to use this as a "dairy" instead I'm going to put up some script Ideals/ story ideals I have in here I hope you enjoy that and hope this gives me motives to finish then also. So I'll post the first page of "Entropy" as soon as I finish my homework.
-goth dinah