I have write a love story I dont know how it just hit me(it just happened honestly) Its about a drawing that I have done the other day and I start writing its not big but I would like to hear some opinions
The Lost Wing

Once upon a time…as every story begins there was an angel named Damziel who committed only one sin in his life…He fall in love with a mortal a beautiful princess of a far kingdom named Ariel.
They loved each other so much that the evil goddess of the gray sky couldn’t stand them so she imprisoned Damziel into a fortress up to the highest cloud of her sky and stole his right wing so he could never leave.
Weeks later alone into his prison Damziel died from his sorrow. No one ever grieved for his lost only Kumi a spirit of the night felt his sorrow. Then the night of his death before the spirit of Death arrive she put his soul into a black stone and flew into the night.
Hidden in the shadows she stole Damziel right wing from the evil goddess and enchant it with the stone so he could fly and find his forbidden love.
Two years passed…Kumi traveled through seas and lands to find Ariel’s kingdom.
Until one night she found a castle in the middle a lake surrounded by the a strange sound of a grieving woman and asked the night stars “O night stars who see the world who’s this grieving land who’s the sad one?”
No one spoke but a small star who found the courage to speak and with sad voice it said “It’s the land of broken heart o spirit of the night it is the land of Damziel’s forsaken love Ariel who still awaits his return day and night”
Kumi then run to the castle and found the princess Ariel in her room crying for her lost love “O princess of this land queen of Damziel’s heart I am here on his behalf for he was trapped into a dark place away from freedom grace.” Ariel looked at Kumi with tears in her eyes smiled and said
“So he is alright that’s why he send you is it not? To rest me for his return? ”
Kumi couldn’t hold her tears anymore and said
“I am afraid not, for I am a bearer of bad news harbinger of sadness and doom for I am holding Damziels ripped wing enchaned with his will brought it to you as recollection of his love at least this is what I thought I should do.”
Ariel took Damziel’s ripped wing and hugged it as her tears dropped on Damziels soul she said “I thank you spirit for bringing my love for now we can be one once and for all I thank you again spirit for giving my happiness once more and broke me free from the doubts of my love” 
Then Ariel used Damziel’s wing and flew with his love as they used to be
They flew together once more up to the stars that he used to love
and when they flew high enough she hugged him like she used to love
and together to the end they met their wet tomb as they fall into the lake from the sky to the deaths cold sight
so their souls could forever be bind.
But there is a myth among the spirits from that day that Damziel’s and Ariel’s souls are together in that wing and their love could make the bearer of the wing happy as they used to be. Although its sad to say that the wing’s fate is lost into the lakes mercy who knows maybe one day the wings fate bring happiness to someone’s fate
                                                                                         Count Damian