2008-11-22 [Artsy]: Mm... no inspiration for this one huh? Good words, but no flow.. for me... *shrug*

2008-11-22 [Tekkon KinKreet]: no i was cold, and noticed leaves falling and that's what happened

2008-11-22 [Artsy]: It's more simplistic than your other works.. unrefined sort of...

2008-11-22 [Tekkon KinKreet]: i think maybe it fits the subject tho... cuz i mean... when you really think about it... the changing of the seasons is rather abrupt... at least it is in ohio. lol

2008-11-22 [Tekkon KinKreet]: or maybe its just that we don't pay attention to the changing becuase we're too busy bitching about the season, and don't notice that it's changed until we start bitching about the new one... hmm

2008-11-22 [Artsy]: It's like.. each refrain of the poem starts as a thought. A solid, clear idea that you firmly made into words in your head, then with each line after in that section, your thoughts get more and more fleeting until it's just brief ideas...

2008-11-22 [Tekkon KinKreet]: oooooh the shortening thing? I did that on purpose. lol