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When anyone declares an attack click the edit buttion and wate for the monster or other player to react judging by the number rolled by the D20 # in the bottom of the stat on the right side ofthe screen above a 10 is a hit below is a miss/dodge.ok?good :D ~M~

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Welcome to "The World" the largest online game in the world,played by 20 million people.Useing head-mounted displays,gamers can freely move inside a totatly realistic world.There have been problems with the game in the past,but recently it's been trouble free.More people are joining each day.

As you log in you see a strange man dressed like a Ronin with a black sweeper jacket stareing at you"....WELCOME!to The World I am Cial Flame blade one of the many adminastrators for The World..I hope you have a good day and"He gets cut off as a ping sound is heard and a red envolope appears over his head "uh oh..whats this about"he opens the mail and reads it"....oh..oh my....i need to anounce this immedeatly..EXCUSE ME..EXCUSE ME EVERYONE!"at least one-hunderd people turn to look at the strange man "I have troubleing news..there is a glitch in the system were the monsters LV's are determined so if you go out of the city please use extreme caution.It is advised not to go off alone till the bug is fixed..Lord Balmung is already looking into this and he wants me to tell you all that when this problem is fixed he will have a(n) exciteing new event for you all to enjoy..I felt i should warn you all about both new reports....You may carry on as you were..."at that the strange man turns around and starts to walk off..

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A girl who was new to the world had listened to everything he said. She was nervous and even afraid when she heard about the monsters, but at the same time she was curious about being out of the city and what the monsters looked like. Watching as people were leaving to the city, she went the other way. She kept walking, then saw a cave up ahead. "I wonder what's in there" she said to herself, walking up to the cave and going inside, looking around with what light was shining through.

The cave walls start so shake as rocks start to fall to the cealing landing all around her and a low rumble can be heard all around.

The Admin from earler was rushing through the Adminastration building ordering around system moderators when a blue envolope appears over his head "Damnit not here,Balmung! take over" at that he disapears in a ring of fire a sleeping admin suddanly wakes up "wate this is your job!" the ronin appears out side a cave reading the message he got."someone mesing wiht the programming damint.." he runs in the cave as rocks start to fall and he begins to slice them in half before they hit him.

Star screamed and went to run futher up the cave but stopped when a huge rock fell down in front of her. She sat down where she was and covered her head "I should of never been to curious"

The Admin hears the scream and runs further into the cave sliceing rocks as they fall.

A huge monster made of rock makes it way twords the girl slowly its gravely luaghter filling the chamber.

Star screamed when she saw the monster made of rock and slowly stood up. She remembered the sword she had, but she'd never used one before. She started hitting the monster with the sword, hoping it'd go away

The admin sighs thinking 'time to show off'."nova slash" his sword starts glowing white hot and he dashes through the cave past the girl and slices the monster in half."Hmm..hello"

Star looked at him "Hi,H-how did you do that??" she asked, shocked.

The admin looks at her "I was five levels higher than that golem,hmm i reconize you from the croud..didnt listen did you? that was at LV30..you LV 1?odds not in your favor"

"I know...I'm sorry.." Star answered, feeling guilty and nervous at the same time. "I-I was just wondering what the monsters looked like and what it was like out of the city"

"its fine."walks over to a treasure chest behind the Golem and taps it"hmm its not traped,you can have whats in it.and no i dont know i dont usuly patrol this area."

"B-but are you sure?? I mean, don't you want what's in it??" she asked, shocked by how nice he was being.

"na I'll come back when im not on duty"a blue screen appears near by and he goes over to it and starts to reapir the area.

"Well...I think you deserve it..I mean, you fought it off" she answered with a smile "I'm going to go now I guess, I don't want to cause any trouble. And..thank you..for saving my life" She commented with a smile, stepping on rocks and going towards the entrance.

The pannel closes and the cave returns to how its supposed to be."hay if you need me use this"he throws a scroll at the girl.

Star turned around and grabbed the scroll, looking at it "Thanks, but how does it work?" she asked, looking back at him, feeling dumb Wow, I sound stupid..I shouldn't of even said anything, I should of kept on going *Sighed to herself*

Another chuckle from the Admin "just open it,by the way how bout i take you to an un affected area so you can train?"

"Oh, sure. Thanks" she said with a smile, standing up with the scroll in her hand

"ok lets go"the admin walks out of the cave and heads tword a large ring floteing in the clearing.

Star followed behind him, looking around then at the large ring. Just don't say anything, you don't want to sound stupid

The admin walks throught the ring"come on,to the feld" and gets transported away

"O-okay" she answered, walking through the ring also and gets transported to where the admin went

*the area looks like a huge meadow with little dogs and some scare crows running around*

The admin lies down on the ground and sighs

Star looked around curiously and sat down nervously next to the admin, looking down at the ground not knowing what to say "S-so. Um..You've been here long?" she asked

"here as in this area of here as in the game?"

"Yeah" Star nodded with a smile

"well ive been playing the game for about hmmm..i guess five years"

"Five years?? Wow. You have a lot of experience then" she said, looking around the meadow

"not with this data. i used to be considered a demon"starts laughing

she laughed "A demon? Wow, you must of been very strong then"

"yes,but thats a story for another time"

"Okay" she said, smiling then looking down. She wasn't as nervous as she was before, but she still was nervous. "S-so um..this place seems nice so far..except for that golem back there" She noticed how dumb she must of sounded and looked away. Why do I even bother talking? I'm probably just going to say something stupid*Sighed*

"thats great<the golem was purly an accident and ill take care of the people behind the bug"streches and hears someone yelling at him."eh?"looks up to see a little kid carrying a sword way to big for him "crap"

the little kid runs up screaming "FOUND YOU BOSS!!!"

"damnit...ignor him he will go away eventully.."

"Oh, okay" she said with a smile. She then looked behind her and saw the kid and giggled "Who's he?"

"some kid i helped a wile back now he wont leave me alone"

She laughed "Aww, well he looks nice. He just likes you" she giggled

"oh well"sighs

Suddenly she heard a knock at her door "Oh no, I gotta go, it was nice meet you! Bye!" she said quickly, leaving the game. She walked over to her door and opened it, seeing her mom standing there. "Oh, hey mom"

Her mom smiled "Hey honey!" she smiled and hugged her "Well, you're keeping your apartment nice and clean"

"Yeah" she answered with a slight smile.

Her mother closed the door and walked inside, sitting down. "So how've you been?" she asked with a smile.

She sat down. "Good, how about you?"

"Well, I'm actually leaving tonight. You know, business trip. So I just wanted to say good-bye. I don't know how long I'll be gone for. Do you have pepper spray or anything in case someone breaks in??" her mom asked

"No mom, I don't need it" she said with a laugh "I'll be fine. Anyways, you should go get some sleep, you look kind of tired"

"Yeah, well I guess you're right" her mom said, standing up and kissing her cheek "Good-bye, I'll call okay? I love you sweety!" she said, walking out the door.

"Love you too mom" she answered back, closing the door and sitting down. She turned on some music and layed on the couch.

"hmm time to go"gets up and goes to the warp gate and disapears

She looked at the time "Only 3:40? Wow, it feels later then that" she yawned a little and sat up, turning the music down some. It came to another song, which you could hardly here, so she turned it up louder to where she could hear it. "There" she said with a smile, listening to it. I hope whoever's next door doesn't get annoyed by it she thought to herself.

The person next door hears the song on the raido and removes the head mounted display and walks over to the wall close to were the raido is on the other side and kicks the wall trying to knock the raido over.

She turned the music down lower "Sorry!!" she said. The radio started acting up and went louder again "Great, not again!!" She went over to the radio and tried to fix it as it started booming loudly.

"UN-PLUG IT!"the guy yells as he walks twords his front door.

She quickly unplugged in and sighed in relief "Stupid thing. I'm gonna have to go have it fixed again"

THe guy walks out of his appartment and knocks on the door next to his

She stood up and went to the door, opening it. "Hi, s-sorry about that..." she answered nervously, looking down. She hadn't even been living there for a month yet and she didn't want to start off by annoying anyone or having anyone hate her.

"ah its ok i shouldnt have lost my temper ive been staying up late working,so is your raido broken?"

"I understand" she said with a slight smile. "Yeah, everytime I go to get it fixed it does the same thing. I don't get it"

"hmm want me to try to fix it sometime?"

"Sure, thanks" she said with a smile "Only if it's not too much or anything"

"it will be no problem ill do it when i fell a bout of insomnia comeing on"

"Alright, well thanks, really. I appreciate it" she said with a smile.

Suddenly a medium sized rottweiler came walking in, looking at the guy he started barking

"Shh, stop it!" she said, taking him by his collar and leading him to her room and closing the door "Sorry, he always barks when I have someone over"

"oh,well at least you have a guard dog."

"Yeah, do you have any pets?" she asked

he shakes his head"not really there is a cat that hangs out on my back porch and i let it in when it rains."

"Aww, well that's nice!" she smiled, hearing the door being scratched and sighed. "Just a minute" she walked over to the door and opened it "Would you-" just then Prince ran out and straight to the guy, jumping on him and knocking him to the floor, looking down at him and growling, bearing his teeth angrily.

she quickly walked over and grabbed his collar, pulling him off and holding his collar in her hand. "I really am sorry!!" she said, looking around for his leash then snapping it onto his collar and putting him into the room once more she closed the door. She then focused her attention onto helping him up and looking at him worriedly "are you alright?? he didn't hurt you did he??"

"im good i just felt like i was getting greated by balmugs mut again.."at that he gets up and dusts off

"Oh, this has happened to you before?"

"yep"reaches into his pocket and get out a og treet and gives it to the dog*

The dog quickly opened his mouth and chewed down on the treat. He then started to bark.

She sighed. "he want's to go for a walk now, I'd invite you along but you seem really tired, so maybe another time" she answered with a smile, going to open her door.

"alright later.."he turns around and goes back in his room.

she walked outside, but as soon as she stepped out, Prince started running down the sidewalk, pulling her "Stop! Right now!" she tugged on his leash and sighed "You need to stop eating so much". as soon as she was done walking him she went back inside and soon went to sleep herself.

<Next Day>

"and that is that" a computer screen turns black and some one in a rolly chair spins around " Areas 1-25 are fixed"

she yawned and got up, seeing it was 9:30. She walked over to the floor and turned on her game, putting on her head display and returning to the game. She looked around the world "hope I don't do anything stupid this time" she said to herself, walking down the trail, seeing a few people.

THe admin from yesterday appears in town and streches"hmmmm"

She carried her sword and walked past some shops, looking around at them and the people. "Well, this place is busy"

"busy busy"the admin mutters as he walks down the street.

She looked at a big man in front of her who was yelling at some kid and walked up to him, glaring "Hey, who do you think you are yelling at him? Just because you think you're so tough!" she exclaimed angrily

The very buff man looked at her and laughed "You shouldn't talk to me like that-unless you want to die" he added, smirking coldly

She smirked "Like i'm scared of you" she said. She was kind of scared, but at the same time, she wasn't about to let him step all over her.

The man slapped her across the face and kicked her to the ground "You're weak! You just stay away from me if you're smart" he answered, going to walk away.

She put a hand on her face as a couple of tears ran down her face "You jerk" she said, forcing herself to stand up then stood in front of him "You're gonna pay for that!!" she picked up the sword in her hand, she'd never used it before, but she was going to try. She hit it at him, causing a cut on his arm as blood started to appear on the surface. She smirked evily "Well that wasn't bad at all. Looks like I'm smarter than you think" she answered

The man looked at the cut on his arm and then at her, now very angry. "You're dead!" he said angrily, although in pain then hit her across the face again even harder this time and punched her in the face,into a brick wall, causing her to go unconcious. "Hmph. Foolish girl" he muttered, ripping off a piece of his shirt and wrapping it around the cut on his arm, clenching his teeth then starting to walk away.

sudanly fire surrounds the man."you do not attack other players your account is being frozen for three weeks"the admin says as he steps out of the flame "the girl on the other hand is not at fault for self defence you have now receaved your first warning"the man's character disapers as the admin walks over to the hole in the wall.

she slowly opened her eyes and looked up, grabbing the side of her face in pain then looking up weakly at the admin she had seen before. "wh-what happened?" she asked quietly, feeling a little dizzy. She felt as if she were going to black out again.

"are you ok??"helps her up.

"thanks. Yeah, I-I think so" she answered. She felt some pain and was a little dizzy feeling as if she'd collapse but she was sure she'd be fine.

"does the pain feel real or does it feel like a tingle to your real body?"

"It feels a little bit of both actually. but it mostly feels like a tingle to my real body than being real" she answered.

"ok,thats good as long as its just a tingle"

"well it is kind of, it feels a little more than a tingle but that's it, but i'll be fine, thanks" she said with a smile, ignoring the pain now.

"are you positive becauseif something is wrong you need to tell someone.."

"All I feel is a little dizzy, some pain, and that's it" she answered. "I should be fine"

"if your positive"

"I think I am. I mean what's the worse that could happen?" she asked with a smile. I probably shouldn't of asked that... *sighed gently to herself*

"well some people have been sent into comas frome mess ups in the game..."

"What?! I-um...I mean I guess I could have someone make sure I'm okay" she answered nervously

"ok that should be fine..and dont worry unless there is a major f-up nothing bad will hapen"

"Okay, well that's good to know" she smiled in relief. "Where is the place at that we need to go to?" she asked curiously

"hm?for what??sorry i spaced out"scratches the back of his head.

"The place I need to go to make sure I'm okay" she smiled "It's okay, don't be sorry" she laughed.

"You shouldnt need to go anywere unless you feel really bad."

"Okay, well thanks. Really, no one's ever been this nice to me" she smiled. She turned around and then looked back at him "what do you do here?" she asked curiously.

"what do you mean?do you mean what i do here as in this location or this world??"

"This world" she stated with a smile

"im an admin..i make upgrades,weapons mainly,and make sure no one is breaking the rules"at that he closes his eyes and leans his head back.

"Oh, so you're really busy then. You have a cool job though, I mean, making weapons? I wish I could do that" she said, then looking around and back at him. "I should go though, I'm sure you have a lot of work to do. Bye, and thanks again for everything" she smiled, walking away and turning a corner. She sighed to herself "I really need to practice with this sword" she said to herself, looking down at her sword then heading away from the town to go to a quiet area.

The admin chuckles"busy??me laughable"he mutters wile getting up"i think shes scarde of me...hu"

*an explosion can be heard from the center of town*

"the hell!?"he exclames before dashing off towards the explosion.

Star turned when she heard the explosion. "I wonder what happened" she said to herself, running towards the noise as did a few other people out of curiousity that heard it.

*were the explosion happend a large monster rises out of the crater*

Star stopped and looked in shock "Whoa..I didn't expect it to be THIS!" she said. She looked around as a couple people were staring at it. "Okay, I can do this, even though you're still not that good with a sword, you can do this" She said to herself, running up and aiming it at part of the monster's chest as she watched it slice through she smirked "Well, i'm pretty good at this"

*the monster falls to the ground and turns into a large pile of black goo a begins to ooze tword her*

"Ew, get away from me!!" she screamed, slashing down her sword at it;hoping it'd go away.

*black tenticles rush at her trying to crush her*

Star slashed her sword at the black tenticles, hitting it a few times, trying to aim it better.