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Chapter Eighteen


Tanner smiled at the other three students who smiled back at him. Marigold watched in curiosity. What strange children she thought to herself. They were very amusing to her. She had never seen such calm children before in her life. They knew something she didn't and she was dying to find out.
Glenn on the other hand despise the children. For one thing, they encouraged that little girl's imagination. He had never let his children have pretend friends. He had three children of his own which he believed to be the best children ever raised: then came Stu. Stu was different and took a lot of work but he had raised well too: or so he thought.
He turned a slightly to look at the children who were now in deep conversation. He didn't care who their parents where for they sickened him. They seemed to be too happy: their teacher was dying for Pete's sake! Did they have no respect for their elders?
“Yes sir,” Yoshiko said suddenly. “We respect our elders. We just know our teacher isn't going to die.”
Glenn realized that the students were talking to him but he choose to ignore them. The door opened, a student came in: it was the same old story. This one was tall with raven tresses that waved behind her. Her eyes were a lovely shade of hazel. She sat down between Tanner and Cleo. Glenn sneered: the student heard.
“That's Glenn I'm guessing.” She said. All of her friends nodded. “May I?”
“Be our quest!” Johji said.
The girl smiled. She placed her hand into her pocket where she pulled out some purple dust. She threw it in the air, blowing it towards Glenn.
“What in Elton John's name?” He asked. He looked towards tre kids.
“Have a nice learning experience Glenn!” The girl waved happily.


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2004-05-25 [mywolfalways]: There’s a lot of tense conflict in this chapter, so you may want to check that. Also some problems with “there” and “their”. Wow…kinda a trippy chapter, but I really like it.

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