Discussion of Origins


Back~ Origins The First Chapter

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Character Design:
~Asities: Hair color/length/species (would be hot short haired red-head ;] )
       Age can be adjusted as well.
       Could be the god of Obsidian/Volcanoes, hence the change in hair color... the green eyes would work with the red hair too :P
~Ckor: Changed his hair/eye color and his species type. Also made him sort of a pervert.
~Using angels as Raven's parents... seems a little cliche to me. Maybe her mother is a Bewinged and her father a harpy? Both have wings lol
--Hmm, I agree that the angel thing is quite cliche. It seems an interesting idea with the bewinged/harpy thing^^
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Plot:
~Phae is enslaved by her brother instead of simply being captured
~Ckor, Phae and Asities already know each other
~Maybe... instead of Lisowin tracking them down, he is being held in Ehzital's dungeons and on a torture rack? and since lisowin would be hard to detain it makes it easy for the trio to get it? Still need to figure out why they would go in to begin with...
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Worlds:
~Instead of using special aliens as transports what about portals?
~On the idea of using portals- what if what Phae's brother is doing (remember, he was starting some sort of war or something) is causing the portals to appear in different worlds, he's messing with something greater than he should or something like that?
--That is a good idea. But also, we had decided that the element demons were doing something about, by bringing Raven back into the equation... so maybe the portals are disrupting the balance of power in the universe? Thankgoodness the god of transportation is on the counsel.
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Ages:
~OLDER! lol
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Creatures:
~most of the unknown creatures are referred to as beasties
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Gods/Goddesses:
~Changed Ckor to be Guardian of time, not god. Though, he is still a god.
~Specified now that Asities is the god of obsidian.
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