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2005-03-22 [barutha]: these are great i think. i wish i could write structured poems. are you a member of allpoetry.com? get feedback and that pretty decent.
2005-03-22 [Ylaraniala Majere]: Wow, some of these are really great! The only thing that you could possibly fix is getting the lines to have the same syllable count.
2005-03-23 [pegasus1000]: I like your poems. They are nice. Thanks for telling me about your poems. I really do enjoy them. Especially the last one on this page.
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: Thankyou barutha, Ylaranila Majere and pegasus 1000 I really appreciate your comments and I am very interested in allpoetry.com.
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: eyyyyyyyyyyyyy
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: hello you how are you my cheeky friend
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: lol am ı cheeky? :O):O)
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: Yes you sure are.
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: why?
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: I don't know I just think you are.
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: oke thxx :p
2005-03-23 [Koffles]: These are very good, the first one I especially like. Keep up the good work! Just a couple of pointers - try another rhyme scheme, like a sonnet or vilanelle. It'll add some variety, and you might just enjoy the challenge! And the syllable counting thing. :D
2005-03-24 [farawaygone]: ok thanks for the comment koffles Im not actually sure what a sonnet or vilanelle is, I told you I am very amatuer... I understand the sylables thing though*smiles*
2005-03-28 [guiltyangel]: i like your poems! i especially love the one called believe
2005-03-28 [Doormat]: I like the ones that rhyme o.0
2005-03-28 [guiltyangel]: *sigh* btw people i put one of my poems in the other members poems thingy...
2005-03-29 [farawaygone]: sorry guiltyangel I had to leave for a few days I will go check it now thankyou...
2005-03-29 [farawaygone]: Diablo Jr. thankyou for liking my poems that makes me happy.
2005-03-30 [Madhalf Heatlump]: You have a beautiful innocence to you that is in your writing and it is wonderful to see...
2005-03-30 [farawaygone]: thankyou so much. Rob you have beautiful pictures that you give out as gifts to everyone that is a really special thing
2005-03-30 [FaST2HaMMeR]: hello hunii
2005-03-30 [farawaygone]: hello
2005-03-30 [FaST2HaMMeR]: what s up?
2005-03-30 [farawaygone]: not a lot atm
2005-03-30 [FaST2HaMMeR]: k
2005-04-06 [Ricko]: guiltyangel's poems are good
2005-04-06 [guiltyangel]: will you stop doing that rick?
2005-04-06 [farawaygone]: I agree ricko :)
2005-04-07 [guiltyangel]: :) starflyy he only says it cos if he doesnt he wont get any tea lol
2005-04-08 [farawaygone]: awww now I understand *grins*
2005-04-08 [guiltyangel]: lol *grins evily* hes ok tonight though cos im not cooking he he he
2005-04-09 [FaST2HaMMeR]: hii
2005-04-09 [guiltyangel]: hi
2005-04-09 [farawaygone]: hello fast and guilt
2005-04-10 [guiltyangel]: good day
2005-04-10 [FaST2HaMMeR]: ı came
2005-04-11 [farawaygone]: Welcome back f2H
2005-04-11 [Ulaan]: :D all good stuff
2005-04-11 [farawaygone]: Thanks red
2005-04-11 [Ulaan]: :D
2005-04-11 [farawaygone]: :)
2005-04-14 [Ulaan]: YEY!!! best poem ever!!!!!!
2005-05-01 [maup]: you are very talented ....keep up the good work....
2005-05-01 [farawaygone]: thankyou same to you maup your poems are wonderful... :)
2005-05-01 [FaST2HaMMeR]: :D
2005-05-01 [farawaygone]: hello cheeky man
2005-05-01 [FaST2HaMMeR]: hello sweety
2005-05-01 [farawaygone]: what ya up to?
2005-05-01 [FaST2HaMMeR]: ım bored ım at home now and ım alone
2005-05-01 [farawaygone]: sounds interesting I am going to have to go shortly neco.
2005-05-01 [FaST2HaMMeR]: oke mucksxx
2005-05-01 [farawaygone]: goodnight neco :)
2005-06-04 [Koffles]: One person, one difference and Shine I think are your two best pieces, but the others could do with some revision, just try looking for words that would fit the rhythm more exactly, but other than that, keep up the good work!! xx
2005-06-04 [farawaygone]: thanks koffles I have only just started recently worrying about the sylables in my poetry. So they should be a bit better from now on.
2005-07-02 [farawaygone]: Thanks for your help with the links [Ultiem]
2006-01-21 [Pink_Pixie]: Hey everyone if you write poetry checkout my new wiki *Yours and Mine: ET Poets United*
2006-09-01 [pegasus1000]: your poetry is very nice. I like your poen "I stumbled upon myself" the most on this page.
2006-09-14 [farawaygone]: thankyou pegasus, that is very nice of you to say so :)
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