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2005-03-22 [barutha]: these are great i think. i wish i could write structured poems. are you a member of allpoetry.com? get feedback and that pretty decent.
2005-03-22 [Ylaraniala Majere]: Wow, some of these are really great! The only thing that you could possibly fix is getting the lines to have the same syllable count.
2005-03-23 [pegasus1000]: I like your poems. They are nice. Thanks for telling me about your poems. I really do enjoy them. Especially the last one on this page.
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: Thankyou barutha, Ylaranila Majere and pegasus 1000 I really appreciate your comments and I am very interested in allpoetry.com.
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: eyyyyyyyyyyyyy
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: hello you how are you my cheeky friend
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: lol am ı cheeky? :O):O)
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: Yes you sure are.
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: why?
2005-03-23 [farawaygone]: I don't know I just think you are.
2005-03-23 [FaST2HaMMeR]: oke thxx :p
2005-03-23 [Koffles]: These are very good, the first one I especially like. Keep up the good work! Just a couple of pointers - try another rhyme scheme, like a sonnet or vilanelle. It'll add some variety, and you might just enjoy the challenge! And the syllable counting thing. :D
2005-03-24 [farawaygone]: ok thanks for the comment koffles Im not actually sure what a sonnet or vilanelle is, I told you I am very amatuer... I understand the sylables thing though*smiles*
2005-03-28 [guiltyangel]: i like your poems! i especially love the one called believe
2005-03-28 [Doormat]: I like the ones that rhyme o.0
2005-03-28 [guiltyangel]: *sigh* btw people i put one of my poems in the other members poems thingy...
2005-03-29 [farawaygone]: sorry guiltyangel I had to leave for a few days I will go check it now thankyou...
2005-03-29 [farawaygone]: Diablo Jr. thankyou for liking my poems that makes me happy.
2005-03-30 [Madhalf Heatlump]: You have a beautiful innocence to you that is in your writing and it is wonderful to see...
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