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2006-10-02 [Fizban]: so this 2054 is there present time?
when is present?
2006-10-02 [Talkris]: 2254 is the present time.
2006-10-02 [Fizban]: right, thats what I mean...
however...I am going to spread this out a little...
the state would have been seperated for a longer span of time...
ovbiously by 2254 it is rippped apart,...but I am going to state the year that it was ripped apart,...fill in more of the events of the time line.
2006-10-02 [Fizban]: I typed several paragraphs...-
then pressed enter and realized you had the password up on this page...*sigh*
2006-10-02 [Talkris]: Its the same as the others, love. I hope you saved the paragraphs. Thats why I always write things out in Word and then edit a page with it. That way I don't loose it if something goes wrong.
2006-10-02 [Fizban]: I was just quickly writing it before I went home, so no, I dindt save it at all...
2006-10-03 [Talkris]: Crap. Save stuff!
2006-10-03 [Fizban]: yo no soy un cabesa
2006-10-04 [Talkris]: Dur
2006-10-13 [Talkris]: What I just put is the last entry in the history part and also the first entry in the RP. The RP will still be done on the RP page. But this is going to stay here, as I may alter it still, at least until the history is fully finished.
2006-10-14 [Fizban]: oh wow cool...
I have to cut wood for my grandma from 9 in the morn to 12-1:00 in the after noon, then goo to work a bit later then that....
so I have no time at all for anything...
also I have a term paper due tuesday, 3 programming homeworks one of which I dont know how to do,...
oys...I am dumb.
2006-10-14 [Fizban]: I like the beggining, I would work on history, but I have responsibiliti
2006-10-14 [Talkris]: Aw man, the one time I am caught up on my work with only one packet due on Monday that is almost finished.
2006-10-15 [Fizban]: how life works, when you get time I loose it...universe needs balance. you can only get free time if you take it from someone else...lol
2006-10-15 [Fizban]: is everyone everywhere going to feel the affects of the shockwave?
2006-10-15 [Talkris]: Yeah, everyone will feel the shockwave above and it will feel like a small earthquake below. But don't worry about it for now. We need to finish the history before the RP-ing starts.
2006-10-15 [Talkris]: I like what you wrote thus far. ^_^ The explosion is going the be the final straw. Before that, all acts of terrorism were smaller, like taking out a store or two. Cars and such. There are almost no known records of attacks on civilians, at least not intentionally. The attack on the power plant is the most extreme and first city wide attack.
2006-10-18 [Talkris]: I don't know, I just feel like it coul dbe worded better toward the end...Or maybe its too much of a summery of everything else? I don't know. -_-
2008-10-15 [Rat Hacker]: Okay where would the Locusts live, upper or lower? Interesting story however some parts are a bit hard to understand. Anyhow yeah sorry if I am getting annoying, please forgive me if I am.
2008-10-15 [Talkris]: The Locusts are in the Lower city. And I know some bits aren't as clear as they could be. Hence why I need to rewrite some of it.
2008-10-17 [Fizban]: The lower city is at best the poorer qualities but mostly the slums and at worst in places uninhabitable. Held by the lower classes; this is where the resistance movement fights those in the upper city, who hold all the power and quality of living.
The seeds, in particular those who have liberated themselves from the rice institute help lead a faction of people against the uppers control, on top of fighting the rice institute (the militarized laboratory facility responsible for bio-technologi
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