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2008-02-20 [~Valkyrie~]: Please, please, please write comments for me! I really want some thoughts and constructive criticism.
2008-04-19 [Company Awesome]: Gawd Comment!
2008-04-19 [~Valkyrie~]: *rolls eyes* That's not what I ment. :)
2008-08-28 [Love and Chaos]: Your stories are great. But if you add to them with more description, it will help. especially with the length. I've noticed that mot of your chapters are only a paragraph or two, which is fine for short stories, but if you wan t them longer more description will help. Good luck and I hope that I've been able to help. I look forward to what you do. and please feel free to check out and critique my writings as well at Love and Chaos's Writings. Again, Good Luck!
2009-05-13 [Company Awesome]: GAWD, Another Comment!
2009-05-13 [~Valkyrie~]:
[Love and Chaos], thanks for the comment. I know, I've been working on my stories, [black ice] especially has changed a lot. I need to get these updated...But for right now, I need to get back to addressing envelopes for my graduation anouncements.
Good Bye Highschool!!
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