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2006-08-02 15:48:29

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Not another one...

A boy and a girl
The best of friends
From elementary to high school
From beginning to end
Through all these years
Their friendship grew
They both felt the same
But neither knew
Each waking moment
Since the day that they met
They both loved each other
Sunrise to sunset
He was all she had
In her terrible life
He was the one
Who kept her from her knife
She was his angel
She made him smile
Though life threw him curves
She made it worth all the while
Then one day
Things went terribly wrong
The next few weeks
Were like a very sad song
He made her jealous
On purpose he tried
When the girl asked "do you love her?"
On purpose he lied
He played with jealousy
Like it was a game
Little did he know
Things would never be the same
His plan was working
But he had no clue
How wrong things would go
The damage he would do
One night she broke down
Feeling very alone
Just her and the blade
No one else home
She dialed his number
He answered "hello"
She told him she loved him
Then hung up the phone
He raced to her house
But came a minute too late
Found her lying in blood
And her heart had no rate
Beside her was a note
And in it her confession
Her love for this boy
Her only obsession
As he read the note
He knelt down and cried
Grabbed her knife
And that night they both died
She was found in his arms
Both of them dead
Under her note
His handwriting said
"I loved her so
She never knew
All this time
I loved her too"

2006-08-04 [Kiddalee]: Eh? At least it makes an attempt at rhyming, but I'll say the same thing about this one as I've been saying about all the suicide pasted things. These kids should not be dating if they base their entire identities on their love life, thus causing them to want to die if that little section of life takes a downturn.

2006-08-04 [moonscale]: I know, its absolutley ridiculous. Especially when you think that if they had just kept an open channel of communication and had not tried to be cruel and selfish...*sighs.* People hurt themselves trying to hurt others.

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