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2004-09-06 [Dragonthryth]: hey thats good i take it it is yours? well any way one problem though it is small: i htink you want 'are' to be 'our' so it is 'our prisons' in stead of 'are prisons' but i'm not to sure bout tht one.
2004-09-18 [*_* Smiley on Ecstasy]: Oops! You're right! Also, this poem was written by my dad, not me.... I wish! lol. *runs off to fix grammar*
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