This is the place you list your wiki page to your work so you can have feedback from other writers' perspectives.

Please, follow the rules of the group and Elftown! As a reminder, here are the rules for again!


Formatting Rules:
Follow the format of how to list your work.
Include the comments on the Elftown wiki page so the author can keep track of them.
Leave a space between yourself and the person in front of you so things look nice and neat.

Overall Rules of this wiki group:
Don't be an asshole. This is also Elftown's rule.
Don't flood the writing area with tons of requests.
If you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all. See: rule 1.
Keep the industry-established comparisons to a minimum. It rings insincere when your feedback is "you're just like X author!" all the time.
If you want feedback, you need to give feedback, too. For every item you post, you need to read at least one other person's work and give constructive feedback. Failing to do so will result in your works being removed from the "wants feedback" section.
No disclosing information about another writer's works to those who have not read it.
Sign the members sheet so you can be updated when new people post, join etc.
You accept that by participating the mods can remove you for the group for violating the rules and delete your posts.

Rules for the writers:
Don't post entire novels. Break works up into no more than 3 chapters/poems/short stories at a time.
We are not professional editors. If you want something more than the services offered here, you'll need to look elsewhere.
Follow the rules of the writing postings.
Don't beg for readers.
Don't get angry at constructive feedback. If somebody is being cruel, report them to one of the mods of the pages or report them to the guards--if it is bad enough.
Post a content rating and warning at the top of each work.
Post in the appropriate section of the wiki page for genre and medium.
Give an idea of what feedback you're looking for i.e. "Does the dialogue in this scene sound stilted?" so we are primed to help when we read.


Rules for the readers:
Don't give feedback that wasn't asked for save for minor spelling errors.
When you give feedback, remember to be kind and gentle when phrasing your thoughts.
Don't hate on works because they are out of genre for you.
Don't hate on works because they have content you don't like--i.e. violence, sex.

Novel Chapters

[wicked fae mage] - RECASTBONDS CH1 -fantasy, mild violence, PGish- looking for feedback on what sort of mood the chapter gives to readers.

[The Black Cat in Your Path] - Blank_Chap.1-2
Fantasy, modern fiction. Content warnings: mild violence.
Looking for general feedback about the flow of dialogue and story, and impression of characters.

Short Stories

[wicked fae mage] - EONS To COME P1 -fantasy, mild violence, creepiness, PGish- looking for feedback on if the ending to this part is satisfying to the reader or if not, what is lacking.

Poems

[wicked fae mage] - WFM BLOOD RED POEM -mild violence, creepiness, PG13ish, looking for thoughts on the flow of the lines.

Script Scenes

[wicked fae mage] RECAST BONDS TRAILER 1 -creepiness, slight violence, suggestive themes, looking for thoughts on how the protagonist himself comes off with a mixture of the performance in the audio version and how the script makes you think he should sound.

Links!

Writers Reading for Writers
Writers Reading for Writers Members List
WRFW Suspended List