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2005-04-24 17:32:11
Last author: Wes Foxx
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The Legeands of Inari: Act II



This is the fantasy story it took me about a month to write (the planning's been going on for almost a month more, I'm hoping it can get that big!) Its about someone who wakes up without memory (classic amnesia thing, i know, but its good!) with an awesome sword and turned into a kitsune (aka fox anthro, aka human that looks like a fox or vice versa)

But dont read it until you've read The Legeands of Inari: Act I, or you'll miss out on whats happening!

Tell me how you like it! <poll:49318>

While your reading, think about joining us at the Order of Inari, the RP group based in the same world as the Legeands

I really could use some actual commentary on the story; so far all I've ever gotten is so general its not much help. "Good job" and "your a great writer" tell me I'm doing SOMETHING right, but not WHAT I'm doing right =/ Plus, I love to see what people think about the characters, what they think will happen in the story, etc

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