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2005-08-12 [ArchRose]: Nooooo!! thats a rip off, i want more!!! *crys*
2005-08-12 [Forever Equine]: I'm sorry, I may post more if more ppl like it. I really sensitive about my writing because I've had ppl tell me that I suck .=(
2005-08-12 [ArchRose]: lol atleast you have someone comment on your writings, i have poemsArchRose's Poems and a story It's not a dream anymore that have never gotten any feed back so i've just assumed they suck so :P lol
2005-08-12 [Forever Equine]: I'll be sure to drop in and give them a look over. Fair warning tho, I'm a very constructive on my crit so I hope you don't mind.
2005-08-12 [ArchRose]: lol not at all ^_^;
2005-08-13 [moira hawthorne]: intesting... death
2005-08-13 [Forever Equine]: Was it good? or bad? See any errors that could be fixed?
2005-08-13 [moira hawthorne]: its good there are a few things that beg for a deeper explaination are a few words Id change
2005-08-13 [Forever Equine]: can you email me some suggestive changes or critique?
2005-08-21 [Gwendylyyn]: I like it, babe. Hehe...I started a story years ago and got a good ways into it...and then I just stopped....I'v
2005-08-21 [Forever Equine]: I've done that several times. I could probably have a whole library by now, most of the ideas fell flat as did the material. Thanks!=)
2005-08-22 [Gwendylyyn]: Well the idea did not go flat..it was an awesome story and I'm not afraid to say that. I feel I was doing quite wonderfully with it...and then my inspiration faded. One of the characters in the story, one of the main back-up characters, was based around my ex-fiance. When things between he and I started to get bad...that's when I stopped...I just did not know what to write anymore...
2005-08-22 [Forever Equine]: Ah, I can defiantely see why. WOuld you mind telling me the idea? I'm really interested and maybe with some new inspiration you can get started again.=)
2005-08-24 [Gwendylyyn]: Well, you know me. Totally vamp chick. So, it's about my version of the first vampyre. Female, of course..and from the future which is nothing like everyone likes to think. :p She in on another planet, one that almost everyone left Earth for after it was all but destroyed, the only people who stayed behind being Native Americans. I could try to type up some of it and send it to you if you'd like. Again, this was years ago so it, of course, needs a good amount of touching up in the writing. I have gotten better since then...but my newer stuff is the kind of thing I keep to myself and close friends who won't be all @.@ when they see/hear it. I can send you one of my favorite new ones if you'd-
2005-08-24 [Gwendylyyn]: like. It's kind of short. =/ Unfortunately, me best new one got stolen and destroyed. *sighs* And I only had one copy at the time. *sighs*
2005-08-24 [Forever Equine]: I'd really be interested! I had a story going about a half vampire and it was rather intriguing but then my ideas changed. I may go back to the idea. I'm really sorry to hear that it got stolen. That's the worst thing anyone can do to an artist.
2005-09-01 [The Chronicles of Faelan]: Hey [Forever Equine], your forward is very well written, a few minor spelling mistake and punctuation errors but it is still very well written, your wording is far superior to mine :)
2005-09-01 [Forever Equine]: Thanks for the comment but I've reread over a hundred times and have found no spelling errors, Perhaps a few punctuation but oh well, I guess I will have to read again.
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