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2009-02-12 [Linderel]: Again, me likes. :3 Especially the second stanza, and the last five lines of the first one. Doesn't quite hit me like the other one did, but there's some really lovely imagery and word use. ^_^
2009-02-12 [Chimes]: I like the last bit. :P I want to draw this saint. XD I bounce to this when I read it in my head... it sounds so happy. xD
2009-02-12 [Linderel]: Haha xD
Yeah, it's pretty happy-sounding I suppose... but then before the last line it just abruptly stops, there's a sudden break - and then the whole thing is turned on its head as far as tone sounds. At least I had to imagine a break there the first couple of times I read it xD
2009-02-12 [Chimes]: :P The rhythm is happy when I read it... The poem itself... is a little mad. XD
2009-02-12 [Linderel]: Just a little bit, yeah xD
2009-02-12 [Chimes]: Therefore, I will illustrate it at some point.
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