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2011-05-01 [Duredhel]: She does? O,o
2011-05-01 [La Luna]: Yes, It kinda keeps her from going crazy and she is fairly Judgmental
2011-05-01 [Figgy]: Light is usually pretty quiet XD She really only talks if she has alcohol in her system or she's with Shade or Addy, or trying to piss off Shana. She definitely doesn't go around being boastful, though she is a bitch XD
2011-05-01 [Figgy]: I get if your character thinks that, maybe, but is there a specific instance that she saw her, maybe intoxicated, picking on Shana or something? That would make more sense.
2011-05-01 [La Luna]: Ah, I should fix that to say she has a bad attitude
2011-05-01 [Figgy]: Better XD
2011-05-01 [La Luna]: xP Sorry
2011-05-01 [Duredhel]: It's usually good to watch out for what's called metagaming. Before writing what your character knows or thinks, ask yourself "does my character know this because *I* know this? if not.. when did she witness or hear something that would make her think this way?"
2011-05-01 [La Luna]: Oh, Thank you Dur, that'll help.
2011-05-09 [Veltzeh]: Wait, how long has Magnolia been in the mansion?
2011-05-09 [La Luna]: Um, maybe a week? I'm not sure, Figgy would probably know..
2011-05-11 [Duredhel]: Ok yeah :/ seriously, we talked about metagaming before, now we're gonna talk about sticking to your story.
Magnolia acts absolutely nothing like her bio says she should act. Making your character a shut-in or shy is not making ONE post in which she's shy and then she opens up to everyone. Seriously, this is not only for you Luna, but for a LOT of the newer players, stick to what you write. If you want character development, that's great, but it doesn't happen over a post, or an hour, or a day. Characters change over weeks, months or years.
I get that you, Basco, Danboo and Arctic are just beginners, which is why we get so adamant about trying to coach you, we want to hold the level of RPing here to a high standard. If you write something in personality, stick through with it. At the risk of tooting my own horn, check how Dani plays out, and then consider you've made out Magnolia to be much more extremely introverted than her in the bio.
2011-05-11 [La Luna]: Sorry Duredhel! I really need to work on this, I'll try to stick to it some more!
2011-05-16 [Duredhel]: XD Seems Magnolia always likes the last person she's talked to best.
2011-05-16 [La Luna]: She doesn't really talk so when ever she does it makes her like them more XP
2011-05-16 [Duredhel]: O,o... evidence points to the contrary.
2011-05-16 [La Luna]: Wait what?
2012-09-15 [Duredhel]:
2012-09-15 [La Luna]: Awww! She's so cute :3 Thanks Dur! I love it!
2012-10-17 [La Luna]: Mag is in the Den I believe, waiting on Ivan
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