2011-06-16 [kians mummy]: thanks mort

2011-06-16 [Mortified Penguin]: Sammie, I fixed your submission a little to be less aesthetically disgusting, but it could still use some capitalization and punctuation before it looks like an actual attempt at literature.

2011-06-16 [Mortified Penguin]: I could fix that too, if you like.

2011-06-16 [kians mummy]: please do, thanks, i kind of rushed it on a two miniute poem timer

2011-06-16 [Mortified Penguin]: Eh, good enough.