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2009-02-11 [Linderel]: I like. I really, really like. <3
2009-02-11 [Chimes]: Why so? *small dance of joy* :D It was quite difficult but I knew what images I wanted as soon as I looked at the words, it was just a matter of putting them down on virtual paper in a decent way. XD I reserve my opinion making until tomorrow, though. XD Otherwise I'll be too 'Baaaaah, it's crap!' :P
2009-02-11 [Linderel]: It just... calls to me with its cynicism and and and the imagery and gah I don't know xD I like the moody, philosophical, almost conversational tone it's got going. And the last line of the first stanza? Dear, no. Love. <3
2009-02-11 [Chimes]: Haha XD Part of me wanted to add another line or two onto the second stanza, to make the end rhyme... but I'm not sure. XD Part of me wants to, that part of me isn't sure what she'd put, but also another part of me is like 'Noooooo! Don't do it!' XD
2009-02-11 [Linderel]: Don't know about rhyme, but now that you mentioned adding a bit I immediately thought of putting 'my dear (something)' there. <_<
2009-02-11 [Chimes]: That works too... when you look at the first stanza anyway. *ponders the possibility*
My brain just likes to end poetry on a rhyme... *flicks brain*
2009-02-11 [Linderel]: 'My dear me'? Then you'd get the rhyme, too :P
Monologues ftw xD
2009-02-11 [Chimes]: Hahaha. XD That would work... I imagine it in a little sigh-type voice at the end. XD
2009-02-11 [Linderel]: 'sactly :3
2009-02-11 [Chimes]: I think I will make use of your maginificent brainwave XD
2009-02-11 [Chimes]: Could mess with it by adding commas... maybeh XD
2009-02-11 [Linderel]: Haha, I am happy if my brainwaves are of use xD
2009-02-11 [Linderel]: Now if only you could fry things with them, too... :P
2009-02-11 [Chimes]: Now THAT would be cool. XD
2009-02-11 [Linderel]: Totally :D
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