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Valecriden
Chapter 1

She stood near the corner of the dance floor, her back against a thick pole, feeling disgusted. The music, Metallica's One, although a great song, was making her headache worse. She watched the lesser vampires kiss, dance, feed, conversate, and fornicate all over the darn place.

 She heard screaming coming from one corner of the place; she thought a human had strayed in and found themselves victim to one or more of theses creatures. But as she ventured closer to where the scream had come from, she found that two female vampires were fraking on top of a table, and one was gently nibbling on another's clitoras.

 She shook her head and continued around to walk around the club, looking to see what the others were up to. Some were fraking, some were feeding, and some were actually dancing. She couldn't stand looking at them though, they were what the books, movies, and fairytales depict them as: blood-thirsty, pale, undead. Compared to her sons and daughters, these were ugly sonuvabitches. These were his children. Dracula's children.

 She saw a table- circular, large enough for one person, and sat down on top of it. She felt angry, thinking about him. Books and stuff say that he was the first. But what history doesn't note is that there was one before him: his sister, Yoko, the valecriden.

 She was born a vampire, years before Dracula came about. The daughter of Lucifer and a succubus- his concubine, she was named Yoko, and later adopted Agito as her last name. She grew like a human, until she hit age eighteen, where she stopped growing physically. Even though she is hundreds of years old, she has the body of an eighteen year old.

 She was the most beautiful of all of them. Blue eyes; very long blonde hair; and caramel-colored skin. She was tall- five eleven, and thin- one hundred and twenty pounds. She had a C-cup and a butt to match. Normally, she is a gentle person, but when in a fight, she can be quite violent, and unmerciful. The thing that makes her better than the other vampires is that she can do things that normally destroy vampires, i.e. walk out in the sun. But, she does share some things with them: like her need for blood to survive, and she is more powerful in the dark.

 Dressed in a black skirt, black high-heel boots, fishnet stockings, a black turtle-neck (with a red satin bra and red satin panties underneath), and her hair pulled back and put into a braid, alot of men came and hit on her, but was rejected. She is not really into relationships, not after what happened to her fiance, Kuragari Satoshi. He was jumped and killed by some vampires in this area, and she was here to find who done it.

 She glanced around the club. The vampires had started dancing faster. " I feel bad for her. I didn't know he was her boyfriend." Two vampires were in mid-conversation behind her, talking about what could be her fiance. She hopped off the table, spun around, picked up the table and tossed it at the vampires. It hit one, knocking him to the ground. " Hey, who are you talking about?" The man still standing looked at her and flicked her off. "Why should i tell you, bitch?"

 With great speed, she zoomed from where she was to infront of him. She graabed his throat and lifted a two hundred pound man into the air with one hand. "Who are you talking about?" He looked into her eyes. " Some human named Kuragari. He was dating some vampire chick. So, we roughed him up, raped him, and killed his puny-ass." She tightened her grip on his throat. " We?" He chuckled. " Me and like, twenty others. Why, you knew him?" She threw himdown, on top of his friend. " I was the one he was dating!"

 By now, the entire club was silent, and everyone was looking at her with angry looks on their faces. In the crowd, she could hear people yelling, " Get the hell out!" or "Let's beat her ass into the ground!". She smiled malevolently. " You guys want to fight? Then come on."

 Three men from behind her stepped forward. She turned around and smiled. "Victra Uni Kona Linura Tikla- Electric Funeral." Electric bolts shot out of her body and hit every vampire in the club, disentigrating every single one of them.

She took a few steps backwards, and fell on her butt. " Has his children become so ugly. To rape a human, no, a male human?" She heard of female humans getting raped by vampires, but never males. She brought her hands to her face and began crying into them. " Kuragari... I'm sorry... if only I'd went with you..."



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2007-01-14 [shadow frost wolf]: aww...... thats sad<img:44166_1164145230.gif>

2007-01-26 [~Spirit Fox~]: Yes I agree

2007-06-22 [Bobby Bro]: I think it needs changed...

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