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2009-07-15 15:32:48

Last author: Chimes
Owner: Chimes

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Don't stop. Keep going. Clock's ticking. Work. Work. Always work. Never any money, though.

Keep quiet – mayor's coming. Can't let him see. Hide food. Not allowed. Not here. Rake thin, you have to be. Too much consumption and heads will roll. Crash. Hit the ground. Thud. No one will be home for supper. Can't cook it. Creates a smell. They'd know.

Knock. Knock. Door opens. Dark faces peer inside. Huddle. Whimper. Children at the back. Eyes move across. Glance. Blink. Stutter. Then leave. All inside heave a sigh.

Next house. A scream. A gasp for breath. A door shut. Silence.

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2009-07-15 [Chimes]: 100 words, weird style. Took me three days... buh. Anyone who ends up watching this... please comment. :) Constructive criticism is wanted. :) But no 'It should be longer'. I wanted it 100 words for a reason.

2009-07-15 [Linderel]: *blink*

2009-07-15 [Chimes]: Thoughts? Other than the blinking?

2009-07-15 [Linderel]: I'll get back to you.

2009-07-15 [Chimes]: Haha. XD That either means you don't know what to make of it or you're watching too much Numb3rs :P

2009-07-15 [Linderel]: Bit of both :P

2009-07-15 [Chimes]: I'm impressive, obviously.

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