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The Lonely and Forgotten Poems Page 3

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An empty heart

Through shuddering stormes of fears,
and tumbiling winds through the skys.

You wipe away my tears,
and smuther all my crys.

I'm a captive in your empty heart,
to figure out life's a lie.

It was all just a game from the start,
in the end i was left to die.

And in the darkness i call your name,
with no replie my heart starts falling.

And since that day my lifes never been the same,
but i still hear the echos ever calling.

In a empty room,
surounded by the light.

I wonder is this my doom,
when my heartly hopes take flight.

Is this the end so bad,
just left emptyness and lonely.

When i was driven until mad,
as cold as ice and still so stonely.

And in the darkness i call your name,
with no replie my heart starts falling.

And since that day my lifes never been the same,
but i still hear the echos ever calling.

[+♥+SAFFY+♥+]

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I Must Admit

Sand between my toes,
Sun shining on my skin,
Walking down the beach,
With a very large grin.
Toes touching the water,
Wading in deeper,
Coldness grips me,
And the wave get steeper.
Fear sets in,
I try to go back,
Fighting for my life,
A sudden loud crack.
Swept off my feet,
Drug back down,
I don’t know which is up,
Am I gonna drown?
Tossing in the waves,
Thrashed about,
Struggling to breathe,
I’m so worn-out....
So very cold,
I can’t swim anymore,
It hurts so much,
What happened to the shore?
I can’t move anymore,
Am I sinking?
Its getting so dark,
What am I thinking?
Is this the end?
What happened?
How did I get here?
Everything’s unclear....
I guess this is it...
But there is only one thing,
That I must admit...
As my one last good bye...
I didn’t want to die.

[Crimson Angel]

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The Unconscious Dream

I want to live
like a sleeping doll
never to rise
never to fall.

I want to live
like the mundane,
never once needing
my thoughts to change.

My eyes may open
and they may close,
needing help
to form a pose.

As the sky
my thoughts are blank
the world within
reatreats to plain.

I want to live
like a sleeping doll
never to rise
never to fall.

[Tragedy In Trend]

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When I Love You Baby

Stare yourself
In the face
Maybe realize
'There's your faith' -

In every laugh line
Refusing to crease;
In each fleck of desire
In your eyes and peace
Reflecting
As a lie

Because you know
There is no serenity
In being unwanted
By the wanted.

And maybe seeing
For the first time...

What do you see?

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2006-02-21 [+♥+SAFFY+♥+]: yay put ti up i hope it's in the right place

2006-02-22 [Crimson Angel]: yea, it is

2006-02-23 [+♥+SAFFY+♥+]: Great so what do you think

2006-02-23 [Crimson Angel]: thats a good poem... there a bunch of typos though, that kind of pull away from the poem itself. I love the use of symbolizim, and the use of vocabulary, well written

2006-02-24 [+♥+SAFFY+♥+]: .<

2006-04-20 [+♥+SAFFY+♥+]: oh another poem... it's a good onr

2006-04-21 [Crimson Angel]: Thanx

2007-07-07 [Tragedy In Trend]: I added my own, what do you all think?

2007-07-09 [Crimson Angel]: Its interesting, but I don't understand why you would want to have nothing to think, and let others pose you.

2007-07-14 [Tragedy In Trend]: Well, after a lifetime of being told you're nothing, you're opinion doesn't matter, and being teased about how you're not like anyone else and being put down because of it, some just tend not to want to live anymore, not to feel, not to matter to anyone.

2007-07-16 [Crimson Angel]: Well I hope that you will realize that being like everyone else will not bring you happiness. I have found out that I'm not like everyone else, and I love it. Being differenet is what makes me me, and I just find things that I love, and stick with it. Like kids, I love kids, so I am working at a place which is like a chucky cheese's during the week, and a Cub Scout camp run by the BSA on the weekends. So I work for the boy scouts, and I'm a girl. I'd say thats different, but I love it. I have worked there for three years, and enjoyed every minute of it. So I say, find what you like, and find ways to enjoy being different, and live life to the fullest.

2007-07-19 [Tragedy In Trend]: Uhm, most of my poetry is not about me. It's about emotions displayed by some of my friends, or people I know/knew. Or, like this poem, I find a phrase and my mind starts working. There is a book called "The Sleeping Doll" and my mom was reading it. I had this poem down in 5 minutes. I don't feel like this, but what I explained previously, is what I got out of it after I wrote it.

Trust me, i've been spending my life since 5th grade not conforming to fads. I am who I am, and if no one likes me for that, then they don't matter to me. I am myself as well, I love playing with make-up and hair, changing around my furniture every week, coming up with my own designs, playing with colorful things (including eyeshadow and eyeliner), I like people that make friends based on personality. And on top of it all, I love writing. But not everything I write is based on myself and my own experiences.

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