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^{Well most of them are standard A,B,A,B rhyme scheme, not all my work but a good most of it. Sometimes things have a double meaning, but i guess poetry is more about the reader's thoughts rather then writer's comments, so tell me what you think...}

Blasphemous Poetry

A banner for Morithin a smaller portion of solemn lines just kidding! This was made for me by a friend [SaNiTY™] So I placed it on here! Thank you Ashurii-Chan
The picture is my friend's [SaNiTY™] I made the poem to go along with it


Welcome to the Church of blasphemy


When Logic Betrays…

Lost and not found,
Away, in your mind, afar.
Stand, but not on ground,
Stand for who you are.

Plea without a bargain,
Nothing more then a want.
Show without an offering,
Nothing more then a taunt.

The riddle can’t be solved,
You’re the one who made it.
The riddle has evolved,
Can’t you just say it?

Locate the place within the mind,
Deep inside your brain.
Tell me where you find,
No one wants to be in sane.

On Religion…

I am not a lost soul,
This is not a tragedy.
When the black bell does toll,
I stand here, in Blasphemy.

There are two paths in my life,
Both twisted and long.
The judgment of what is right,
The choice of what may be wrong.

This is not to deceive,
Or argue fact or fake.
But I will defend what I believe,
And that the choice is mine to make.

Through my eyes, try to see,
If He views us all the same.
Then let Him the right to judge me,
Where is your right to blame?

I am sorry if I offended,
Conversing this Myth or Legend.
But I exercise the 1st Amendment,
Freedom from Religion.


16 Line Poetry

Let your mind run free,
In all blissful inspiration.
From your mind beautiful words flee,
To the page in desperation.

The act of conveying,
Your inner most thought and feelings.
So much deeper then just saying,
Poetry has far more meaning.

And the images that go with it,
As they fill your starving mind.
Like a beacon finally lit,
From the real world you are blind.

And all of this can come,
Even with all space and time.
From just a meekly some,
16 lines


Tree

Alone in the wood,
Where no man dare come.
Right where it should,
May nature ne’er be undone.

Like a towering guard,
It watches over the land.
Or so says the bard,
In his song so grand.

Over a hundred years old,
Yet leaves still green.
It ears never told,
Its eyes never seen.

That destruction is to man,
That everything must die.
Like the hourglass sand,
And we don’t even know why.

 Walking On The Beach At Dusk (Senior Project)

I walk along a shallow shore
The waves give a small roar
I Find the place i seek
Open my mind as a door

The air soft and sleek
Pleasure in solitude i reek
The moon gives an omniscent glow
Brightening the otherwise bleak

I as i view nature's show
I recall all i have come to know
And what i soon will
Consumed with thoughts that overflow

A forever unpaid bill
Remove the paper from the frill
A cold and silent kill
A cold and silent kill

Ignorence

Alone, Forever...on the task bar of no return,
Here I wait in my blinking bleak existence.
Hoping a glance, my way, will turn,
The mouse clicking with no resistance.
My words, typed, will then be learned,
And then be replied much ambitious.
The silence leaves my only concern,
That I have become viewed with malicious.



Angel X2

She is as bright as a summer’s day,
She is as sweet as a flower.
it is uncanny the supernatural way,
her body emanates such immense power.

No one can resist her charm,
with a smile and a wink.
It almost seems she cannot harm,
I cannot comprehend It I cannot think.

How can she be real?
When the heavens ring her name.
Yet for some reason i feel,
This world will never be the same.

If you approach her she is shy,
Yet she truly is divine.
I hold her name on high,
I pray someday she’ll be mine.

Down With The Sickness

And so I have fell,
Try again, do I dare?
No, burn in hell,
For all I care...

Words, cut like an edge,
Wounds, left deep.
And this I pledge,
What I say, I keep.

All actions, have a cost,
Can you live with it?
Remorse, I have lost,
Do I look like I give a shit?

The end is near,
The horizon, I do see.
I walk with out fear,
"You've woken up the demon, in me!!!"

Contempt

Aren't You Glad We Are Now, And Not There, Because We Can Talk And See Each Other At School Now, But Eventually The Now Will Become The Then, And The Future Will Be Left To The When? When Will We Have Then What We Have Now, To Take And Look Back On Everyday like Wow...Yet We Will Still Be Friends, In The End...

Miles Apart

I remember when we met
And our slightly rocky start
Things may not be perfect yet
"You're always in my heart"

"I need you now"
That you are close
I need to show
Our friendship grows

Let us reminisce
Now that we have time
All about each other we'll miss
"I'll keep you deep inside"

I'll remember the poem
You'll remember the remarks
We'll remember this song
"We'll be miles apart"

Angels & Demons (remix ft. Chingy)

(Ah yall we get it right herr dis da remix)

She is bright as a summer’s day
He is dark as a winter’s night
Her innocence avoids any fray
He is looking for a fight

(TrackStar (oh oh))

His words cut like an edge
Her voice soothing as rain
Pain is all he pledges
She pledges to end all pain

(I like da way you do dat right thurr)

How can she be real?
Will he ever leave?
Her warmth I need to feel
Will his cold ever cease?

(Her man defendin her like a lawyer so bewarr
So dudes be handcuffin but dirrty dat aint farr)

The end is near
Approaching a new beginning
I walk with out fear
I cannot stop trembling

(Disturbing Tha Peace)

Ballad of a Broken Soul

Taking this world alone is not an easy task,
Yet it is one that this young man has took.
I wish I had time to ask,
Why did you leave without a second look?

He left out of frustration,
He left to clear his mind.
He left on a path of dissimilation,
He left not knowing what to find.

Few doubt he has been hurt,
Yet no one knows the cause.
His world has began to blur,
Is all hope truly lost?

He hates his friends,
How could they backstab him?
There friendship held an inevitable end,
Now he is covered with sin.

Blood covers his hands,
Sirens ring loudly into the night.
His feet pound on the sand,
The officers are coming to sight.

He reaches to his side,
This gun he knows well.
Behind a tree he hides,
He hopes to see his friends in hell.

As gun shots fire into the obsidian,
His heart is that of stone.
And as he is cast into oblivion,
He leaves this world, alone. 

The Dragon

Majestic malice soaring above
Flying flapping in the sky
Dreadful diving this demonic dove
Crashing clenching hunger in its eyes

Approaching slowly with a gruesome gaze
Steps taken with a surreal stomp
Smoke bellowing in a haunting haze
Swallowing you whole in one carnivorous chomp

Things that go Together
_{Scribed when I was in elementary school}

One and two go together,
so do mouse and rat.
City and town, sad and frown,
Also dog and cat.

Train and railroad track go together,
So do basket and hot air balloon.
Trees and bear, bunny and hare,
Also moth and cocoon.

Crescent on the Ripple
_{My entry is the Heaven's Above contest}


Along the shallow water’s bank
Among the star filled night
On a stark swollen plank
Encompassed in angelic moonlight

Holding a lover’s hand
A cool breeze passes by
Shores lined with silvery sand
Not a cloud in the sky

Looking deep into their soul
Feeling their presence in your heart
Inside feeling finally whole
Knowing you will never part

Lights emanating from across the water
The world becomes a slow swirl of love and bliss
Leaning in, heart beating harder and harder
Lips pressing softly together as two lovers kiss