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"Zombie Love" | by [Anvikit] |
"Octopus Love" | by [Killopkie] |
”The Fat Man With Wings” | by [light.] |
”A Gift” | by [thoughtfox] |
"My Zombie Valentine" | by [Cliché] |
2007-01-20 [Lee James]: [Lee James]-Roses
Down the stairs of heartache
These steps will never end
Until one day i find my one true love
A kite will take flight
On a black and dull night
But theres more you need to know
Take these 10 flowers
These beautiful pink roses
One is fake
And i’ll love you till the last one dies.
2007-01-20 [Linderel]: It's very nice, but submit on the wiki, and not in the comments. ^_~
2007-01-21 [shotokan_gal]: Lovely entry [Silver Moon] but you may want to do a spell check on it (e.g. chocolate).
2007-01-21 [silent_voice]: I am not sure how to correctly do 'eclairs' If anyone can put the dash on top, please be my guest.
2007-01-21 [Linderel]: Oh gods, I'm starting to think that my name for the theme is a mistake. xD
Lovely entries, though.
2007-01-21 [silent_voice]: Well, im glad you said that on mine *Sarcastically
2007-01-21 [Sunrose]: I'm thinking that we're dealing with a lack of reading skills :P
But, maybe it can be fixed by adding the elaborated text about the theme here?
2007-01-21 [silent_voice]: I think everyone is making it so 'pink' and having all the words is the fear of being removed.
2007-01-21 [Linderel]: It's clearly stated that you only need to use three of them. And the 'Make It Pink!' thing is only my totally-lackin
2007-01-21 [silent_voice]: aww well, it will get better. I know i cant win, i just would like a badge, lol. And its for fun.
2007-01-21 [Sunrose]: >.-
2007-01-21 [MissiMaLy]: [Saqism]- I love your poem, it's really creative with the required words and everything, really cool =)
Wow... that's a lotta pink o_O pretty though, nice job everyone =)
can't wait to see more entries!!
2007-01-21 [Linderel]: [MissiMaLy], if those are two different poems, you should make them separate entries.
2007-01-21 [Silver Moon]: how is it now?
2007-01-21 [Linderel]: Hrm.
2007-01-21 [MissiMaLy]: oh okay thank you [Linderel] I haven't done many contests before- the last one was a photo competition and entries were put together, sorry!! Thanks for whomever fixed it for me =)
2007-01-21 [Linderel]: Well, in a competition like this, it wouldn't be very prudent to put two entries together, in case one got selected and the other not. It would just be more work for us. And I fixed it for you, because the next one had already posted and the numbers would have been screwed up if it wasn't done right away. :P
2007-01-22 [Saqism]: Thanks a lot. A looked at the word zombie, went to flowers, wondered what it would be like to get flowers from a zombie, or a valentine of any kind, for that matter, and it just grew fron there. I should probably write a short story.
2007-01-22 [Heather Thomason]: my poem sucks but i try'd my best
2007-01-22 [Sesil]: Hey! I entered the Valentine Poetry competition last year, can I enter again???
2007-01-22 [Daemon SaDiablo]: I don't see why not. No restrictions on people from prior years.
2007-01-22 [Sesil]: O.K. Thats cool. Cheers!
2007-01-22 [Amarantha]: I think my grammar's ok. A little odd, perhaps, but the basic sentence structure if you leave a little room for interpretation works well enough. Where did you see a problem?
2007-01-23 [MissiMaLy]: [Saqism] it's definitely different then all the other ones posted so far- in my oppinion. Awesome idea!
[Heather Thomason] Don't put yourself down =( Having the courage to post anything you write is AWESOME, whether or not we win any trophies. Keep your spirits up- I liked it. When i read it I imagine it coming from your heart, which is very inspirational =)
okay okay i'll stop talking lolz
[Linderel] That makes a lot of sense now that i think on it more, I'm glad you noticed the mistake for me before it went on for too long unnoticed =) thanks again
2007-01-23 [Linderel]: It's part of my job to notice these things. ;)
2007-01-23 [Heather Thomason]: yeah most of my writings do come from the heart so it was hard to come up with
2007-01-24 [Doormat]: "You gave me flowers just as if I saw
Though now I can, they were so much dry straw.
We’ll walk in sun and fountains make with sieves"
Neither of those make much sense, [Amarantha].
2007-01-24 [Anime Addiction]: mine sucks.... but oh well..... at least i tried...
2007-01-24 [Saqism]: I don't know if it's as bad as all that. Little too long for my tastes, and in fact, my poem you see up there is the longest poem I ever remember doing. The best part of your poetry, to me is that it went on like a song.
2007-01-24 [Amarantha]: Ahhh. Someone has never played with a sieve they were washing! You put it down really fast in the water and it pours through all the little holes, and then you lift it up when it's full and it slowly falls out again. It's really pretty and really fun, especially when you have a lot of dishes. And it was the only domestic activity I could think of that rhymed properly... which is sort of pathetic, but there it is. Basically, the zombie had flowers put on his grave, and he couldn't see them, but he could feel their presence as it were, and if you've ever felt over-the-hill flowers with your eyes shut, if the stems aren't wet, they feel like straw. Bumpy straw. Now the zombie, being a zombie, can see the flowers, but it's an expression of affection and remembered unhappiness. Poor guy's really trying to become alive again for his lady.
All explained now?
2007-01-24 [Anime Addiction]: it goes like a song? really?
2007-01-24 [Amarantha]: It is like a song. It would be interesting to set it to music.
2007-01-24 [shotokan_gal]: [eyelinertears] - I don't think your poem is eligable for this competition. Firstly, entries can be a maximum of 35 lines. Also, yours doesn't appear to contain any of the keywords specified in the theme on the main page - Valentine Poetry Competition.
2007-01-24 [Anime Addiction]: hmmm.... I guess you're right =^_^= anyone's free to do that if they wish... as long as I'm recognized as the author of course =^_^=
2007-01-25 [Flisky]: Wow, corniest thing I've ever written...
2007-01-25 [Artsieladie]: I've been waiting for the #18 for it's the day I lost my Mom, 1/18/'07. Call it sentimental, or something, but I'm a person that always pays attention to the smallest details.
2007-01-25 [sierra_and_chris]: excuse me, but i do not know how to enter the contest. would somebody who knows how to enter, please send me a message telling me what to do step for step? i'm blonde and a little slow to be honest so i am hard at understanding directions but i have written many poems and would like to enter one to show my talent. please help me if you can. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
~sierra
2007-01-26 [windgirl]: oh to enter the contest you just go to edit this page then you type in the number you are and put your name in brackets and then put your poem and make sure the
2007-01-27 [Anime Addiction]: [Anvikit]- I think you only used two words....
2007-01-27 [Anvikit]: Yeah I know, Wasn't sure if you actually had to write the word or, just infere the topic..
*tries a different approach*
2007-01-27 [Anime Addiction]: k, just thought I'd let you know, I'd hate to see your poem booted off, it's really good
2007-01-27 [Anvikit]: There we go, just wrote a new one so if that one goes at least the other one will stay .. lol I like it better anyways... it's silly
2007-01-27 [Anime Addiction]: XD sweet`
2007-01-27 [Anvikit]: Gah, I haven't written a poem in ages! kinda feel nice to give the drawin' hand a break and pick up the writing one...
2007-01-27 [otakubeth]: Woot! These poems are very interesting. They put mine to shame. *sniffle*
2007-01-27 [Linderel]: [Anvikit]: It seems to me that you've only used two of the required words in both of your entries.
2007-01-27 [Nikos Kitten]: i hope you all like it its based on valentines day and its also a love poem
2007-01-27 [Linderel]: You should have read the theme. Your poem has none of the required words.
2007-01-27 [Nikos Kitten]: oh ok
2007-01-28 [Linderel]: [~*Darkness Covers My Heart*~], your poem is too short. It should be at least 8 lines. :)
2007-01-28 [~*Darkness Covers My Heart*~]: Thank you for your help. I am new here so I am still learning. I have only posted one other poem and it was minutes before this one. So thanks for the input!
2007-01-28 [Anime Addiction]: well, it kinda helps to read the rules before you start posting.
2007-01-28 [Killopkie]: octopus's are hott
2007-01-28 [Anime Addiction]: ok...
2007-01-28 [Deleted1906721]: lol [Killopkie], your poem is hilarious! very nice! :)
2007-01-28 [Linderel]: [Killopkie], your poem only has two of the required words (the title doesn't count).
2007-01-28 [Anvikit]: I did read the theme page guide lines. The theme page didn't exactly say you must include these "WORDS" into your poetry, instead it said your poem must include three of "THESE" things.
So if one of the things is the topic of the poem or refered to without mentioning, Or in the title even to annouce the topic, then as I understood the rules it would still be acceptable.
2007-01-28 [Sunrose]: If that would be allowed, it would make this theme pretty pointless to begin with.
The idea is that you are creative in adding the words into the poem, not creative in going around that by referring to them or using one in the title.. :)
2007-01-28 [Anvikit]: Ahh I see, so writing a poem about a topic (mine was obviously about zombies), then using two of the words actually in poem is not acceptable, ..
Perhaps then that should be made more clear on the competition theme page then, since it seems I was not the only one confused by the matter.
You may also want to include something stating that the Title is not considered part of the poem as well.
2007-01-28 [Linderel]: My bad. I imagined it would be clear enough as it is. :P
2007-01-28 [Anvikit]: Well it didn't say "words" so I chose one of the select items as the topic.. as did [Killopkie] it seems.
2007-01-28 [Sunrose]: Yours is really good though Annie, if not minding the word-criteria for a sec.
2007-01-28 [Anvikit]: Oh well, was fun writing them all the same, go ahead and remove mine for failure to follow theme.. I'm going to go work on my peice for the Valentines art Show :D .. I'm more adept at doodling anywho..
2007-01-28 [Linderel]: Or you could poke at your poems some more and make them valid entries? :)
2007-01-28 [Sunrose]: You seem rather talented at poetry too :P
2007-01-28 [Anvikit]: :) Thanks, I might just have to do that.. but I can't think of the tweek just yet.. So it might take me a little while..
2007-01-28 [Sunrose]: The deadline isn't until about 2 weeks from now ;)
2007-01-28 [Anvikit]: There we go, I tweeked the one, but still couldn't find an acceptable alteration for the other, so I removed it for now :)
Thanks and sorry for the confusion, guess I was using my poetic license to think outside the box ;) hehe
2007-01-28 [Linderel]: [Thunder Cid], your poem only has one of the required three words.
2007-01-28 [Thunder Cid]: better :)
2007-01-29 [Killopkie]: Hmm.. ok, I'll try and tweek mine as well.
2007-01-29 [Killopkie]: ok, I think that will do.
2007-01-29 [Linderel]: Yah, looks to be fine. ^_^
2007-01-30 [Artsieladie]: Fixed the space that had appeared in my poem. I notice this happens sometimes when things are added & removed. :P
2007-01-30 [eyelinertears]: I got my poem removed because i didnt add a title?
2007-01-30 [shotokan_gal]: Your poem was removed because it didn't contain follow the theme of the contest. See the main page: Valentine Poetry Competition#THEME. You need to have at least three of the keywords specified there in your entry.
2007-02-05 [light.]: I really hope mine is okay (x_x;) -Is not used to writing things that don't have hardcore gore/sublimina
2007-02-05 [Once upon a dream]: Can someone tell me if my poem pertains somewhat to valentines day? I tried to make it come from a person whos lonely on that day... but I dont think it worked. Feedback anyone?
2007-02-05 [Priscilla Primkin]: It seems to me the theme of the poems had to be "pink", and yours, while being about love, lost or otherwise, which would work with Valentine's Day, doesn't have anything pink in it. Nice poem though.
2007-02-05 [Linderel]: For the umpteenth time, it doesn't have to be pink. The name of the theme is a play with association. Generally, Valentine's is a very 'pink', cheesy holiday, and the theme refers to making it feel like it's talking about Valentine's. I will probably end up favouring fluff, though. ^_~
2007-02-05 [Once upon a dream]: Okay, thanks! ^^
2007-02-05 [ilovevans.]: this is exciting! i havent written in forever!
2007-02-06 [peace4all_monkey]: oh wow. Everyones poem is really really good. Im not sure if mine can stand up to them ^^'
2007-02-06 [Anvikit]: you'll never know unless you try peace ;) I'm sure we'd all enjoy reading it!
2007-02-06 [peace4all_monkey]: thanks for the pep talk.
2007-02-06 [ilovevans.]: wow! there are so many good ones! everyone has such a different perpective!
2007-02-06 [peace4all_monkey]: I really like yours [Anvikit]
2007-02-06 [Anvikit]: Thankies, Oh there yours is! I must have missed it, you snuck it in on me didn't you? *giggles* Was just about to ask ya when you were gonna post it.. lol ..
Your poem is very good peace it flows so very well! I don't know what you were so worried about!
2007-02-07 [peace4all_monkey]: Eh..im just that way i guess. Thanks. Thats a real day booster *nods* Come to think about it. I was just typing randomly, then i posted it.
2007-02-07 [Saqism]: Reading poetry takes more energy than writing it for me. I can't imagine judging it. They all start to blend in after a time...
2007-02-07 [Once upon a dream]: *laughs at [Saqism] 's comment* It's so true
2007-02-08 [ilovevans.]: this just gets more intimidating by the day! haha!
2007-02-09 [Saqism]: Just a note, but it has nothing to do with the quality. It's just so many words. I'm just proud to say I got the ball rollin',and may I say, it's graduated from a snow ball to an avalanche!
2007-02-09 [Once upon a dream]: hahaha
2007-02-10 [Aurora Of Moonblade]: Everybody's poems are so good, I just don't think that my poem is up to par with some of yours.
2007-02-10 [peace4all_monkey]: are you kidding?? i love your poem
2007-02-10 [Aurora Of Moonblade]: Really? Thank you, but I think the first part of the poem was kind of darker than the rest...I don't really know. Yours is really good, too. I like your choice of words.
2007-02-10 [peace4all_monkey]: thank you
2007-02-10 [Saqism]: I think the mood in my poem shifts a bit too sharply in the middle, of course, to some this may be a possitive thing.
2007-02-11 [Once upon a dream]: Yay! Todays the deadline! Aren't all of you excited! I can't wait! Good luck everyone!!! ^^
2007-02-11 [MissiMaLy]: Good luck everybody!! There are soOo many good entries this is going to be a tuffy!! :)
2007-02-11 [Anvikit]: So many great last chance entries!! lol, It's getting down closer to the wire now! Best wishes and much luck to all!! Wow, this is gonna be really hard to judge..
2007-02-11 [Once upon a dream]: When do you think they'll announce it!?!
2007-02-11 [peace4all_monkey]: oh man, lots and lots of anticipation swells up inside me!!
2007-02-11 [Linderel]: Well, seeing as this IS the Valentine Poetry Competition... the winners will be announced on Valentine's Day. ;)
2007-02-12 [Fizban]: Thats awesome, because I can't wait to see who's the winners.
2007-02-12 [Morningstar Rising]: Good luck to all
2007-02-12 [Once upon a dream]: Ooh *blonde moment* I knew thaaaat.....
2007-02-12 [Artsieladie]: Yes, good luck to all & spread the !!!
2007-02-12 [Silver Moon]: thnx
2007-02-12 [Once upon a dream]: See you guys on Wednesday!!
Best Luck to all
2007-02-12 [Anvikit]: Happy Valentines all you lovers of the Town of Elf! And To the loners and broken hearted keep your chin up till next year! .. *gives great big hugs all around, oh no you can't run from the hugs muhahaha!! *glomp**
2007-02-12 [Anime Addiction]: It's not V-Day yet, there's still 3 days left... or for some of you 2 days...
2007-02-12 [Saqism]: In an internet that moves so fast, three days is an awfully long time. Happy V day. I'm saying it now, because holidays generally depress me so. Don't know why. I wonder if they can even properly judge this in time. But of one thing I'm certain: They'll do a better job than I would.
2007-02-12 [EmeraldGrizzly]: Good luck all ;)
2007-02-12 [Once upon a dream]: *pats [Saqism] on the shoulder* Cheer up. I'll be your valentine that day. kk? ^^
2007-02-12 [Misty Lady]: Lots of luck to all.
2007-02-12 [Amarantha]: Luck luck luck luck! *flicks fingers in a circle*
2007-02-12 [~*Darkness Covers My Heart*~]: Just wanted to wish everyone a Happy Valentine's Day! I probably won't be doing that much celebrating of it since I am always depressed on holiday's. So I figured I better do so now that way I got it out before the dreaded day. Also good luck to all!!!!
2007-02-13 [Saqism]: Heh. Thanks.
2007-02-13 [Anime Addiction]: when will we find out who won?
2007-02-13 [Linderel]: I don't really like having to repeat myself, especially when the answer to a question is on the same darn page... Anyway, the winning poems will be posted on the Mainstreet on Valentine's Day, seeing as this is the Valentine Poetry Competition.
2007-02-13 [Anime Addiction]: true, sorry... I never think straight when I have a head cold...
2007-02-13 [Saqism]: The previous comment was rather funny, when you think about it.
2007-02-13 [Anime Addiction]: ok...
2007-02-13 [NukleaЯ EveЯgloW™]: I thought about it...still don't get it...
2007-02-13 [Amarantha]: It makes sense to me! And it is pretty funny
2007-02-13 [NukleaЯ EveЯgloW™]: I dont get the joke...someone mind explaining it?
2007-02-14 [Anime Addiction]: yeah, please, I'm just as oblivious.... might have something to do with being sick, blonde and tired.... >.<
2007-02-14 [Saqism]: "...I never -THINK- straight when I have a -HEAD- cold."
2007-02-14 [ilovevans.]: happy valentines everyone!!! :D and the joke is quite funny
2007-02-14 [bluefarie]: how are they gonna chose a winner?
2007-02-14 [Saqism]: I ooze with anticipation. Happy Valentines day.
2007-02-14 [Fizban]: happpy valentines!!
2007-02-14 [Amarantha]: *oozing with Saqism*
2007-02-14 [Misty Lady]: Happy Valentines Day all.
2007-02-14 [Once upon a dream]: Happy Valentines Day everyone *blows kisses*
2007-02-14 [Daemon SaDiablo]: -ducks- Happy Valentines day all.
2007-02-14 [Anime Addiction]: Happy V-day.....
2007-02-14 [Silver Moon]: Happy Valentines!
2007-02-15 [Anime Addiction]: congrats to the winners.
2007-02-15 [Silver Moon]: congrats.
2007-02-15 [Misty Lady]: Congratulation
2007-02-15 [Artsieladie]: Congratulation
2007-02-16 [Morningstar Rising]: Congrats to all the winners, nice job
2007-02-16 [peace4all_monkey]: when do we get the donantes badge?
2007-02-16 [MissiMaLy]: All of the winners entries were so fun to read!! Congrats to all, it was really fun just participating with everyone!!
~aly =)
2007-02-16 [Killopkie]: Woot, thanks :)
2007-02-17 [Anime Addiction]: wow.... I guess I participate every year.... except last year i think...... I only remember this being my second badge...
2007-02-17 [~*Darkness Covers My Heart*~]: Congrats to all the winner's! I enjoyed reading every poem!
2007-02-17 [Silver Moon]: love my badge
2007-02-17 [Once upon a dream]: YAY! My first valentines day badge!! Love it! ^^ Thanks!
See everyone next yearrrr
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