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Characters | Codename | Ratings |
Zane E. Lewis | Dartz | 0 |
Derek Rae Schwierking | Rodent | 0 |
Nikoli Kael Gallagher | Age | 0 |
Danielis | Surge | 10 |
Virgil Hawkins | Smokey | 0 |
Daniela Morgan | Shield | 0 |
Shade | Shade | 0 |
Camille Anderson | Hawkeye | 0 |
Light Arely Tilar | Impulse | 0 |
Shana Grace Tilar | Ambiance | 0 |
Adrianne Wagner | Blink | 0 |
Mihir Proudclaw | Atsila | 0 |
Kyle Bedlington | Vitriol | 0 |
Valerie K. Sprouse | Snapdragon | 0 |
Laurel Stutten | Midnight | 0 |
Magnolia Cassabella | Reaper | 0 |
Nathan White | Entropy | 0 |
Everett Rowels | Echo | 0 |
Elizabeth Charms | Flame | 0 |
Michael Moonfrost | Grizzly | 0 |
Squid | Squid | 0 |
Lynn Sickert | Ice | 0 |
Korvka Shostakovich | Axis | 0 |
Vladimir Shostakovich | Invalesco | 0 |
Justin Alphar | Warp | 0 |
Kaider Getalahan | Cord | 0 |
Teena MacTormin | Glissade | 0 |
Endelyn Hagan | Blade | 0 |
2009-11-04 [Veltzeh]: Looks good to me. I'll only nitpick about grammar: there are some spelling issues and punctuation could be clearer (many commas could be replaced with periods for example). ;)
Of course I could fix that too if you don't mind and look it over afterward.
2009-11-05 [Danboo]: i think i corrected it
2009-11-05 [Veltzeh]: Yep. :) The two last paragraphs/sen
2009-11-05 [Danboo]: lol not much to do :P
2009-11-26 [Duredhel]: Why is Virgil's relation chart in Danielis' page? O,o
2009-11-26 [Danboo]: cause i'm too hyper and not enough of sleep
2009-12-14 [Duredhel]: 2 more to go.
2009-12-15 [Danboo]: oh wow... pretty damn close
2011-05-25 [Figgy]: Umm... Okay, this seems like it could be kinda fun in regards to this kid being HELL on Earth for Light. Buuut, his power needs to be narrowed down. I get him being able to control electricity and stuff, but I don't see him housing it in his body, or sending body signals, or reading it, really. Maybe he could FEEL it coming from something.
2011-05-25 [Danboo]: well, i'm at a crossroad, whether to change his powers to techo-electrok
2011-05-25 [Danboo]: and another option, changing his powers to a completely different type, an "antidote" type
2011-05-25 [Danboo]: also i'm prolly changing his name, maybe techno or something
2011-05-26 [Danboo]: or surge..
2011-06-03 [Danboo]: lol i liked that one too
2011-06-03 [XxTsomexX]: :D Welcome newbie!! :D lol well the character at least
2011-06-03 [Danboo]: lol thanks, i look forward to having fun with him bwahahaha
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